All Comments on 'His Little Married Size Queen'

Shite!!

Nope. Do not think the anniversity is going to happen.

Sucked. That was -1 star. I pay extra for the privilege. The Bear will not be reading more.

The BEAR

Might have slowed down the story and added more depth. Keep writing and ignore noncontructive criticism.

Yeah. She sure loves her husband. She demonstrated how much she loves and respects him by having amazing sex without him.

no cuck tag=1

A good story that could have included how she hot started with the boss and where it was going to go and

I know one thing that'll get her heart racing when he puts it in her mouth.

He being her husband.

A .50 cal Desert Eagle

"Hope you enjoy the last load you'll ever take, bitch"

"By the way, Dave cried like baby when he knew he was gonna do some swallowing".

Fade to black...

I can only think that this story is not set in the US because in a country where people are allowed to own and carry guns it's inconceivable that a jumped up little wank stain like David wouldn't have been put into the ground by now.

Who cares and want to know about a cheap dirty whore? No one! She isn't a woman, is just a fuck hole in the wall!

Too many children writing stories

On our last anniversary, I fucked two men before I met my husband out for dinner. I showed up with their cum sliding down my thigh. I walked up to my husband who was sitting at the bar, took a big swallow of his drink, leaned over and whispered in his ear…” I let them both cum in me..” it was a great anniversary.

So you give you husband boss head..call him daddy let hike take pictures. Was it worth, both you life’s

At least unlike the prior story, this was mercifully short.

Every "new" author is pushing only femdom fetish cuck unrealistic fantasies. No wonder the regular very low rating they are getting.

That’s why you don’t marry them. Just fuck and run. This wife deserves to be old and lonely

Size matters!

If she wants to keep her Daddiy, she needs to let him impegnate her!

a real slut hope he has an std

Nice, but maybe he takes her to the bar next time and shares her ?

Sad story, would like to think her husband found out and managed to sxxt on David from a great height.

Still, as life's not like that.... hope she gets some unwanted friends (Pox) from David and Mike gets rid of her ASAP.

Sorry hate the story.....you need to put some more meat on the subject matter.

How about someone shoves a gun up his ass and see what kind of response he comes up with and it would be nice for a husband to walk in and do the shoving!!!!

just plain cuckold shite .. i read the last 4 line's and that was 6 to many

This slut wife will be tossed aside when David tires of her. She is obsessed with his oock and gives little thought to her husband. As long as she get away with it no reason to stop. Of course when David does discard her she won't become faithful to her husband. No, she will be looking for another man to dominate her and use all her holes. She may very well wind up as a whore, servicing men's cocks for money.

For a short story, it was mildly entertaining.

What a slut, bosses like that eventually pay most dearly

C'mon guys! What's with the shotgun guzzling and. 50 cal deep throating? This isn't to say that David doesn't deserve to suck from the teat of a Smith and Wesson. It is absolutely rancid to even imagine having a boss so despicable that he would go after his employee's wife! And for that reason he certainly deserves Mike's undivided attention! But what Mike needs to do is to use a small caliber, think .22. Take David to a spa, have him lay comfortably on the masseur's table, face up. Knock him out! Strap him down. Pull his head back and open up that throat. Wake him up. Now David is ready for some action. Imagine the effect of a single shot straight down the ol' gullet of a hog like David. Leave David ball gagged and strapped to the table. Explain that now is the time for him to contemplate the kind of person and boss he's been. Tell him his death will be slow and painful. Tell him you have a slut waiting for her special treatment as well. Go home,

Wait a few days. Take your slut up to see what's left of David. If he's still alive, all the better. Tell her that David has been missing her wonderful mouth, tell her she needs to start sucking. When she can't suck anymore have her climb on top of David. Strap her down. Give her a shot straight up her tainted cunt. Tell her the error of her ways. Ball gag her, David isn't using his anymore. Leave, go to a palm covered island with lots of tropical fruits.

You haven't solved a problem. But you did deal with it.

David left the house with a smirk on his face, sliding into car his ears failed to pick up the little sound of a click as the mechanism armed as he settled in the seat. Five minutes down the road the radio which had been playing some jazz went quite, as David fiddled with the volume control a voice came through the speakers, one that he reconised, " hello David you may have had my slut wife tonight but in fact you are the one thats fucked" The newspapers the next day reported a man had been killed when his new electric car had caught fire and exploded the resulting fire had been so fierce that even some of the metal panels had melted. Some wag in the pub suggested the middle man had been deprived of a job because the crematorium had been bypassed.

I heartily disliked it.

This is an excellent story but I have one suggestion for improvement. Mike should have come home while David was face fucking his wife and been completely delighted. He should inform David that he acknowledges that David is the superior man and is glad David is treating his wife to the intense sex she deserves. He should tell David to shoot his load all over his wife’s face and then Mike would lick her face clean of David’s jizz. Then Mike would get his best bottle of 20 year old single malt and pour all three of them a drink and give the bottle to David. Mike should then beg David to take his wife with him for the evening because it is Mike’s and his (un-named) wife’s anniversary and she deserves to be with a real man on her anniversary, and obviously Mike is an unworthy worm. His wife (you really ought to name your characters) thanks Mike profusely and tells him how much more she will enjoy her anniversary by spending it with David since Mike’s baby carrot of a dick is pathetic and she is so glad that Mike acknowledges this. David however laughs at both of them and tells her he got himself off on her face because she’s a lousy fuck not worth using for anything other than rough head and Mike is welcome to her crappy cunt. Mike tells David he is of course right and his wife starts crying and says how disappointed she is that all she gets for her anniversary is a worthless fuck from her mini-dicked husband. David takes the bottle of Scotch and leaves, telling the un-named wife as he goes out the door that he will fuck her face next week in his office. She says she will be looking forward to it because it means she will only be going without sex for week. Mike tells her not to worry, that he will take care of her sexually until her encounter with David in a week’s time. Un-named wife laughs at Mike and says it’s time for our big anniversary dinner. They go and all they talk about during dinner is how masterful David is, how Mike can never hope to satisfy her like David does, and she then gives Mike his detailed list of orders for chores he needs to do around the house. Mike agrees and is inwardly gratified to be in his rightful place in his wife’s life.

THAT’S how your story should have gone.

Wrong category. This should be in Erotic Couplings. Marriage has Nothing to do with this story. So she's married, so the fuck what? The entire story is about a fantastic fuck session, that's it. Reading about cruel people being cruel is not erotic nor interesting. Just gross. Aren't you embarrassed?

So little wifey literally wrote the textbook on Toxic Masculinity before she became part of David's harem. So will there be an addendum?

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Do any of us think she will keep her anniversary date in 2 hours?

If this were labelled with accurate tags, this would get a better rating, I would think.

Slut cumming from a large cock violating her throat is hard to ... swallow.... without emotional involvement and build up, or edging... or well, it's just hard to believe.

You definitely have potential though, keep at it, and get a bit more advice, maybe ask authors you like here to read and review?

GL

My wife has a weakness for one of her exes. They guy is a major asshole. He’s been that way his whole life. I’m not what my wife sees in him, but every couple of years he turns up like a bad penny. And when he does she changes. Something in her clicks and she will lose all sensibility. He will contact her and she will find some excuse to go be with him. One time she left to “go to her friend’s house.” I didn’t see her for three days. She came home with hickeys all over her, her nipples pierced and her only explanation is that she just can’t help herself around him. I even moved us to another state but damned if he didn’t show up one day while I was at work. I came home to her sprawled on the bed, the sheets soaked and her wiped out from the sex.

Too bad the anniversary never took place... but the divorce and law suites did

Sorry, but I can't relate to this kind of story. In the present day, he goes to the lawyer and she and the boss are toast. He sues the boss and the company and becomes wealthy and the wife will be divorced sooner than she can think!

And you're not going to tell me that the husband is so idiotic that he has no idea his wife is cheating? Laughable!