by Her11
“The touches they were exchanging weren't sexual as much as they were exploratory. A learning of each other's bodies.” Slow is good.
SO SEXY just Ben & Eric touching is sexy. So different from the other bdsm stuff I’ve seen on here. Love it love it love it, I must have signed on just as they updated because this was at the top of the NEW section. Great work, I am loving these characters as always.
I love this story!! Hope Eric and Ben can come to have a strong relationship. Sounds like they both need to be together.
Love, love, love this story. So nice to see both sides of this relationship.
I love love love this story so much ❤. I can't wait to see what else they get up to 😉😍
I love how they haven't even had sex, till the end, but this still manages to be one of the hottest on this site 🔥
This story just keeps getting better! The wait has been Long I wish this chapter didn’t end so quickly!! Can’t wait for more I check back daily!
This story is too adorable! I especially love the responsible dom-ing in this chapter.
I love this story, please keep it up.
It's truly the hottest, most romantic thing I ever read.
Please be proud of this story. It's respectful, consensual, loving, kind and sexy at the same time. I'm falling in love with these characters.
One thing, as a trans woman I would appreciate if you didn't use the words she-male and sissy, even though you do it in a way that doesn't really bother me.
Keep it up!!
I highly doubt Ben would be able to give Eric the ultimate submission Eric craved for. I know Eric isn't yet seeing it cause the relationship is at it's puppy love stage.
My question is can Ben submit totally? Can he let go?
I hope Eric past sub doesn't come into the picture and teach him how to treat a Dom.
I highly doubt if Ben could give Eric the ultimate submission he wants. Eric might not notice it because the relationship is at it's puppy love stage. Ben is so uptight and closed up.
I know Ben is new to all the BDSM stuffs, but he ought to have done his homework when he found out Eric lifestyle.
I pray Eric previous love doesn't come and teach Ben how to treat a Dom
Oh this is beautiful. The care that Eric gives is glorious. I can’t wait to see how Ben can grow in this relationship. More please more!!!!
It's getting so good
Please don't stop
I check in often to see if you have a new chapter up, so seeing that you did have a new one today made me really happy
This has a good base and secure ideas to continue the story. Keep it moving. We're loving the story and looking forward to Ben and Eric becoming a strong relationship. More please.
I can't wait for a new chapter!! I've been checking in far too often, and I just can't wait.
This is literally my favorite story ever. I’m a sucker for bdsm but with people who actually care about each other. And the writing itself, in a technical sense is really well done. I’m dying to read more chapters. I’m so invested in these characters and I want to see how they grow together. Pretty pretty pretty please write more chapters because this story is amazing
Omg!!! I'm dying, the wait for the next chapter is giving me an adrenaline rush 😝
I can't wait till the next chapter, please post soon, your writing is fantastic 😁🤩
easily my favorite story on here-- I can't wait for a new post!!
Hopefully this is not one of the stories that the author doesn’t finish. Looking forward to the best chapter
Yes I check for updates every day. We need more Ben and Eric! Still the best story on here.
Yass! I love this story and have been obsessed with your writing as soon as I found it!
Keep it up, and thank you!
I just found this series today. I sat down and read them all in one sitting. I need more. Please. I need MORE! I’m gonna have to go digging through your other stories while I wait impatiently for this one to continue. I relate so deeply to Ben, I’m totally hooked.
Pls pls pls continue this story I just read the whole thing in one sitting and I'm invested now. I came to this site expecting sub par word porn but fUCK this is genuinely well-written with actual plot and emotions. And all the CONSENT it's so important and I love that you've focused so much on it, especially with BDSM. Thank you for your contribution to society. Please keep writing. Not to pressure you, of course. I'm sure you have more important things to worry about. But I look forward to reloading this page daily.
Do I check for the next chapter daily? Yes! Please tell us it’s coming soon, I’m hooked.
I really love this story, read it multiple times.
Keep up the good work, can't wait for part 7!
I've already commented but I've been checking daily and there's still no ch. 7. Not to rush you or put pressure on you to provide us with even more free content which you don't have to do in the first place (seriously you are a true hero). But like. I would appreciate it. A lot. And hey, tomorrow's my birthday and a new chapter would be a wonderful surprise :)
But please. I beg you. I live vicariously through fictional characters and I am stuck on this particular story because you got me invested and I have no chill. Also I'm currently living alone and I have no friends here. If I have to comment every day to motivate you, I will. That is a threat.
K bye.
Please with cherries on top continue this series. Please come back, all of us are desperate for more.
I love how these stories represent a healthy lifestyle. I love the consent. I love the caring. This is a novel that should be written. That being said I really need the next chapter. I keep coming back for it and I will be very happy when I see it. Until then I guess I’ll just reread what you have.
Alright, time to follow through on my threat. In each comment, I will include something I like about this story and/or your writing.
Let's start with character design/development. Obviously we haven't gotten too far into the story to have much development, but we already see Ben beginning to accept his sexuality and his submissiveness. BDSM, when done safely, can be a genuinely beneficial to people with anxiety or other issues with control and responsibility, or lack thereof. I appreciate that you made it clear from the beginning that this is more than just kinky sex for Ben, and probably Eric too. Not that there's anything wrong with just kinky sex, but having this additional layer of healing makes it more meaningful. Ben is anxious and stressed, and this relationship with Eric allows him to let that go for awhile, to give up control and responsibility to a person he trusts. From their very first encounter with the kneeling, we knew that submission was helping to relieve some of Ben's anxiety, and I like that part of his character design. The development as he begins to open up and accept himself will be even better.
Thank you for the time and effort you put into your work. Please update soon if you can!
Pleeeeaaaasssseeeee I know I missed the second day of following through on my threat but time has no meaning anymore sorry
I beg of you, please update. Also feel free to tell me to fuck off if I'm annoying you or my pleas aren't encouraging you. But I need more. Pretty pls??
love this story so far! It's really good, keep it up. Looking forward to chapter 7!!!
We are starving, and only you can satisfy our hunger.
By updating this story. Pretty please?
PLEASE WHATEVER YOU DO, DO NOT STOP COMMENTING! They mean the world to me but you will get better luck if you email me, I’m more likely to see them. You can reach me at heroneoen709@gmail.com
Sigh, I spelled my own email wrong it's heroneone709@gmail.com. Again please drop me a line I read all the comments and wish I could respond to all of them!
Another edition of this story pretty please! I just found it and it's great!
And I hope a guy like Eric is there
I am finding the story very hot. I love the way it’s building into a slow romance. Can’t wait to see what the next chapter will bring.
This story is as sweet as it is HOT. Please, please, please continue.
I'm an adict, I cant live without those two cuties anymore. I want to screem out of happynes every time ben and Eric interact. Fuck how much I want something like this to hapen to me in real life. Perfect story, if fills me with lust and awe at the same time. Please, please pleaseeeeeee continue it.
Ma'am this is a great series of stories. I look forward to reading more of your stories. And I think you could probably add to this series if you wanted. Or it is good as it is, excellent conclusion.
How about an early Christmas gift, like the next chapter, PLEASE!!
I like your stories so much: sweet soft , a master who treats his sub to be very carefully. And the boy is waiting till Eric will treat him as a real sub... I am feeling like Ben: I have lost my anxieties and feel very relaxed with Eric. Would like to undergo this in real. Next chapter is coming soon, I hope?
I cant wait until Eric really teaches Ben how to make love, and do all the things he wants. If Eric ever gives Ben An over the knee bare bottom spanking (hint, hint) that will really drive me wild! Excellent story I need more! Please!
This is such an amazing story, both written well and wonderfully thought out. The emotion and genuine connection between the characters has left us all wanting more. Its hard to find stories like this and I hope you come back and update soon.
And folks this is why I will from now on avoid starting a story until it is completely finished.
9 months since the last chapter, I'm beyond disappointed and agree with anonymous, I will avoid any story until it is complete except by authors who have proven themselves to be reliable!
I've read this series at the time it was posted abd came back hoping it was updated. Sigh! It's way too good to be left unwritten.
So did life get to complicated to finish this story? Hope you're able to come back and finish.
Hope you are well!!!!
Beautiful stories, would love to see them finished. Take Care
OH MY GAWD! One of the MOST BEAUTIFUL stories I have ever read, reflecting the desire I have for a boy of my own. More, please!
Been waiting for the update since a year now, hope you continue this. It's way too good to be left unfinished.
Good story
This need to be continued
don't let a lot of us hang. Sorry but this is so good you cannot end it
thanks
This is amazing. I love your characters and their interactions. Keep writing, please!
Looks like I might be comment #80? Success is deserved. It's a fun, fast paced heartwarming story.
This story is amazing!!! It’s the perfect combo of plot and hot and character development and I’m obsessed with their relationship ❤️❤️❤️