All Comments on 'Hit Ch. 02'

in this chapter. see it garnered a red H but no comments? Will we find out what Pete's dark side evolved from? Also reading not so fun games, another interesting development.Thanks for writing....

so much fun.

Cliff HANGER! Or at least that's what I would have said if I had read the story on time. What a fucking ride! I love the way Pete's character unfolds almost more than her's - maybe because it's slower - and I didn't quite see it strolling up. Off to read conclusion to the cliffhanger.

Evebroughtanaxthistime

Absorbing story. Like unwrapping a Christmas present as their relationship develops. Hard to guess her reaction to a real BDSM situation with her natural aggressive personality. Bravo.