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Selena_Kitt almost 18 years ago

You were mentioned...

You were mentioned in the Author's Hangout New Story Review Thread...

WickedDrX almost 18 years ago

Dead men tell few tales.

Really liked the story, right up untill the part where I realized that a dead man was writting it. Try wounding him badly, knowing how much shit he is in. It would draw the story out further too.

maxex5452 over 13 years ago

huh . . . didn't expect that! lol

again i didn't expect that! very creative! very different! i liked it! keep writing!

saratu over 12 years ago

No mechanic,

that I've ever heard of would be that careless to not cover their back. Nor would they be foolish enough to get that close to the targeted individual.

Anonymousover 10 years ago

DOUBLE JEAPODY

HE GOT SCREWED WELL AND TRULY...

tazz317 over 10 years ago

HERE IS A DUDE WHO KNOWS THE RULES

but I guess he forgot them. That will the the 1st and last, TK U MLJ LV NV

Jimjam273 over 3 years ago

The woman always wins.

Men are such suckers.

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