by TwistedPlayr
The characters seem a little flat or plastic, but definately not real. This is not up to your usual abilities. You say she is a wise assed, smart mouthed kinky woman, yet you only showed the kinky bit--sort of. Sorry, but that's just it--the story is okay . . .sort of!
damn that was a hot read i loved the whole set up and the sex was out of this world. i also liked the fact he is going to tell his wife and get her involved it somehow makes the whole thing sexier that he didnt just fuck her and then go home to his loveing wife and pretend nothing happened.