All Comments on 'Hitting the Gym'

by TwistedPlayr

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jimd51jimd51almost 20 years ago
Maybe it's me, but

The characters seem a little flat or plastic, but definately not real. This is not up to your usual abilities. You say she is a wise assed, smart mouthed kinky woman, yet you only showed the kinky bit--sort of. Sorry, but that's just it--the story is okay . . .sort of!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
I thought it was great!

I'm definately heading to see your other work!

jakkjakkalmost 20 years ago
HOT!!!!!!!!

damn that was a hot read i loved the whole set up and the sex was out of this world. i also liked the fact he is going to tell his wife and get her involved it somehow makes the whole thing sexier that he didnt just fuck her and then go home to his loveing wife and pretend nothing happened.

dirtyoldbimandirtyoldbiman7 months ago

oay. steam room is cool, but he is/was married.

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