All Comments on 'Hitting the Reset Button'

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SmuttyandfunSmuttyandfunabout 2 years ago

Really cute, hot story. Loved the twist at end. So well written in so few words. Good job!

JoshFrom53JoshFrom53about 2 years ago

Short, sweet and with a twist. Lovely.

servant111servant111about 2 years ago

Nice O’ Henry…!!! 5 stars.

pepepilotpepepilotabout 2 years ago

Wow, I didn't see that coming. Very good story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I did _not_ like the surprise twist. Dropped the otherwise "love it" to "like it."

ScottishTexanScottishTexanabout 2 years ago

Wow...I totally bought into it. I never saw that last paragraph coming.

Don't get me wrong. I'm not holier than thou. I've done my own detective work when tracking down an ex girlfriend who parted with me on good terms myself. But I only paid for certain records. I didn't hire an agency.

But I was still blindsided by the ending. Excellent job! 4/5.

WillDevoWillDevoabout 2 years ago

Iiiinteresting ending! Entertaining, for sure. Here's to their future!

linnearlinnearabout 2 years ago

Nice ending twist.

Rancher46Rancher46about 2 years ago

Great story, love the twist at the end.

inka2222inka222211 months ago

5 stars for unexpected twist!

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