by SouthernCrossfire
Really cute, hot story. Loved the twist at end. So well written in so few words. Good job!
I did _not_ like the surprise twist. Dropped the otherwise "love it" to "like it."
Wow...I totally bought into it. I never saw that last paragraph coming.
Don't get me wrong. I'm not holier than thou. I've done my own detective work when tracking down an ex girlfriend who parted with me on good terms myself. But I only paid for certain records. I didn't hire an agency.
But I was still blindsided by the ending. Excellent job! 4/5.