All Comments on 'Ho, Ho, Hoes, Merry Chrissymas'

What a neat story and I enjoyed reading it. I liked the twist in the story (fucking his soon to be sister without their knowledge) and I liked how you developed the characters. This story had me reading more for the story than for the sex. The dialogue was good also. I hope you will continue this story as I want to see where you take this and how they cope with the new love they will discover. Thanks for your time and imagination.

Sex between step children has been going on forever. In many cases it was dictated by societal and tribal customs if spouses were separated by death or capture by a rival tribe. I know of nowhere it is against the law for the legally adults.

Great story, character development, and dialogue.

detroitdave

Great story hope there's going to be another chapter or more.

Loved it! Just a few writing errors prevented five stars.

What a clever premise, and so well written. Superb!

I enjoyed your story very much. Loved the idea of the new blended family and how the parents were so understanding and supportive. Please continue the story into the future.

great story had me glued to it from beginning to end.

Such a good story and it left me wanting more.

Great xmas story, loved it! Five Stars!

Great read. Enjoyed it !!

Well executed, fun to read, short enough to enjoy in one sitting, yet developed as a story. Thanks!

I've been reading through all the contest entries and, IMO this is the best one so far! It's two parts sex and one part hallmark movie. A fabulous and heady combination that sells tens of thousands of romance novels every year. You have a gift for sensual story telling!

One of the BEST that I have read on this site. Thanks.

The story worked at every level. I want more.

On the page to give you what I want. You made me laugh and giggle (I NEVER giggle)! You made cringe and cry before I had tears of joy running down my face. Love isn't supposed to come with conditions, with guards or stiffness and crushing sadness. It is LOVE; the one thing in our lives that makes this hell on Earth easier to bear. Sometimes it is just the love of family, but sometimes it is more. Thank you for that beautiful story of more! Please keep writing, I adored this one!! I hope you do well in the contest!!

I have read, honestly, dozens and dozens of stories on this site, always going for the long, well developed ones. And this takes the cake, I think, in every way. It has that taboo, alluring connection yet isn’t just jam packed with sex and lust, but a truly excellent love story was developed that I have been looking for, for so long. The idea, while I have never had a sister myself, of a taboo but especially intimate relationship like that developing, just sends tingles through my spine. Thank you

As a senior / senior (older than the author) I find that there are few stories I can relate to. This one brought back fond memories from fifty plus years ago.

Life hardly ever goes as planned and the ending for this story was warm and believable.

If you happen to revamp the ending I would be interested in reading it. Thank you.

I loved the story. I'm not sure why, but I had a hard time figuring out who was talking, especially in the beginning. I'll chalk it up to my old brain.

Thanks for sharing this tale.

I almost passed this story up after seeing the strange title and then reading the admonitions in the brief intro before the story. Lord, I’m so glad I didn’t, I haven’t laughed so hard in months. I don’t think I can come up with enough accolades to lay onto this story, so I’ll just say that it certainly deserves Five Stars, and I wish I could give it 25. Outstanding story, made my day.

I never expected the ending. It really deserves 5 stars.

Thanks for the well written story.

Any chance of a second chapter?

Well written. Darn enjoyable. Good humor along with the story. Thanks

I have a huge grin on my face. nicely done!

WOW, THINK THIS WAS YOUR BEST.

YOU SHOULD WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER OR TWO, MINUS THE WHORE TARA

Read a few sibcest stories on here where the dad goes apesh*t and beats the guy up and disowns him, so it's really nice and heartwarming for them to get their parents' blessing like that. I really enjoyed this one, as short as it is. Thanks :)

I have unequivocally fallen in love with a number of your female characters. Great story!

Not many of these stories make me cry. This one did. In a good way.

Well this really deserves the "5". A very fresh look at a christmas event story. Thank you for your time and effort ... it was really enjoyed !

Hot more Tara

very good

Great story!

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