All Comments on 'Hold Me!'

Very well written and plausible, I have had a gay female friend tell me about her introduction and its not unlike this . Her curiosity got to her one day and she went to a gay bar for the first time in her life and bumped into a work colleague who then seduced her. She said it was the wildest sex she had ever experienced at that point in her life.

Loved the story and hope you will consider writing a sequel to it as you jumped a couple of years at the end. Did Ally really become the dominant partner, and how did the relationship grow and blossom to the point you left the story at. As it seems Karen was quite receptive to becoming the submissive when they first got together, and it would be nice to see how it all fitted together.

Rgds Al

C'mon! Did she say "yes"?!

Very nice short story, quite steamy. Thank you for sharing it with us!

Very well written and very erotic. It would be nice to read the next sequel and see where it goes. Hope you continue with this story.

Really great one off. Not everything needs a sequel, folks!

Just odds.. 1 million to ONE Ally 🚗 to her 😘😘😘FIRST fuck Karen 🌈 as co worker ❤️ as first time in her 🏡then live with her 💍wife forever. No doubt beautiful

Love it.