All Comments on 'Holiday'

...this one REALLY needs a Part 2

WTF is it with you people or wanna-be authors. you write a pretty decent story then you don't finish the fucking thing. there's so much to work with to make this a five star story. come on get your shit together and finish it. I hope your other stories aren't like this.

IT'S NOT TRUE AT ALL that "when a man is having a logical debate and makes a point to which a woman has no answer,she hits him"!Where did you got such A NONSENSE?!ALMOST NO WOMAN DOES SUCH A FOOLISH THING!When a woman has no answer to a man's point,SHE SIMPLY ACCEPTS that HE IS RIGHT!Certainly a woman DOESN'T BEHAVE like two giddy teenagers!