All Comments on 'Holiday Dream'

Always a pleasure to read one of Ann's stories.

Loved it! Another AD classic! Five stars and a favorite point!

A sweet, simple sexy tale, well told and with great characterisation. Thank you!

Nice story, you could have skipped the ass licking and still had a good story, but it's your fantasy world so party on.

nicely done!

Ann Douglas you have delivered again. If you keep writing I'll keep reading.

Bravo, another great story, please keep writing. Always looking forward to your next fine and articulate snipit.

Richard L

Another excellent short story from you. I love that you set your stories in the 70s as it was a more innocent time and perhaps people were less self indulgent.

A very yummy story, one that feels as though there's more to tell. Thank you for sharing this with us!

It is nice to see a story where the woman is as involved as the man.

Usually the woman is used.

Thank you for that.

Each of your stories, one after the other, bring me to the same place ...... wanting more.

I want to particularly complement your ability to make the characters in you story real and set very believable scenes.

I almost saw myself as P in bed with Eric.

Thank you,

R

Very nice and especially stimulating; I especially liked how the historical aspect of the story was interspersed just enough into the story to further plot but not drown out the sexual side (which was top-notch as well). Bravo!

I find more merit to comments from actual names, not anonymous, so I signed in before commenting. Excellent. I have yet to write a story set in anything but the present, but this was well done. I hope to reach your skill levels. Totally smooth and believable, flowed excellently.

Delightful story!

5

Always love your stories

You write the most enjoyable stories and are easy reading. Keep it up.

Love it! Her lust and passion was palpable... great story.

Great story arc with 2 likeable main characters.

Thank you. Your stories never disappoint!

*****As usual Ann a good story with an interesting storyline with hot sex!! Thanks for sharing.

Ditto to all the other comments - and also another 5 stars for your tele.

Your description of the sex was fantastic. The idea of uninhibited sex with an older woman is a fantasy of most younger men, Eric didn’t have to dream about it, he experienced it. A very lucky man indeed.

sort of had a similar experience only in reverse as I am 69 and she was 29

Well done. Good flow, good realistic action. It was easy to read with trying to figure WTF is going on or who is who. Only question would be if this story was from the past. It seemed to imply that but never really figured out a timeframe.

Just lovely. Beautifully crafted and perfectly paced erotica. Thank you

I loved this story.

Fabulous 5 star Ann Douglas story as usual, but.....A woman born in 1921 who, in 1951 walked away from her marriage because she didn’t want children, would have been a real unicorn. We’re I unattached, I would welcome such a woman into my life today, especially with the bonus of being a history enthusiast. I just have some difficulty envisioning her, as drawn by the author, in 1971. But, I was only 16 then, so what do I know.....

Always glad to read another Ann Douglas story! Thanks for writing!

After a long dry spell, I was delighted to see another outstanding story from you.

To Anonymous who said that it was implied that the story was from the past but you couldn’t figure out a timeframe. The first words in the story are February 1971. I’m afraid I can’t make it clearer than that.

Yes! details git me going!

Well drawn characters with a good story. 5 Stars!

Excellent job Ann. I always enjoy your character development, and ability to weave and structure dialog around the narrative without making either feel forced or phony. Please keep up the great work. It's very much appreciated.

Another well written and highly arousing story Ann. I always say you write good stories that contain sex not just sex stories. Plus it is my favorite older woman/younger man category. Thanks again for all your writing efforts.

P.

Loved your story, and loved that time frame. Laura Petrie, in her Dance Tights, on TV, my god she was so Hot. Thanks for the memories. Five Stars.

Good. Hair woman bald girl. You got it right.

WOW! Another extremely erotic story.

Beautifully written story. Very good development and passionate but respectful lovemaking. You are quickly becoming my favorite writer here. Thank you for sharing.

It reminded me of a short affair I had with my mother's best friend. The first time I discovered fallatio.You are a remarkabl;e fountain of erorica. I tell myself it is all personal experience but it couldn't be could it? How do you find time for living amongst this outpouring of libidinous prose.

Very erotic!

Best regards,

Kathy

Another masterfully written AnnDouglas tale and the little ending fillip put the cherry on top!

Terrific… like always.

Thank you for another wonderful history lesson ...