All Comments on 'Holiday FFM Fun'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Only OK. Too quick and a bit illogical

In the voice of a woman but reads as a man's version of a woman's thoughts. And I prefer more buildup. So the jumps in decisions made it really implausible for me. She just met girl, girl grabs her hand and.slides it up her dress without any flirting? No. Wife tells girl to take it up the arse without asking first? No. Just didnt flow well.

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