All Comments on 'Holiday of a Lifetime'

Superbly written and so erotic

Fun story. Brad, Janet, and Magenta? What about Columbia? Did they have Meatloaf for dinner?

Janet!?

Dr. Scott!

Janet!

Brad!

Rocky!

pretty hot story, and i liked it, it did move fast, and i like more seduction, still it was a four star story

It would’ve been a little better if Freya had lied about being able to get Janet pregnant.

Just to say the little homage to RHS was deliberate (and I apologise I couldn't resist) and for those who know, the central character starts with an F as well but didn't want to go too far.

sexy. started out very adulterous but turned out ok

Another incredible stories from one of my favorite writers. I had almost forgotten about Brad until he renter Ed the story mid page 2. I was wondering how your were going to get him and Freya together and you pulled it off masterfully.

I loved this completely.

The story has all the features - Perversion, Lust, Promiscuity and lewdness. Very well written....

Beautifully written!! Love the RHPS homage as well as the Norse Goddess of Love, Sex Fertility and War!! I 100% could imagine Freya doing this knowing the husbands inner desires and the wife's subconscious Switchy self!! Also fun fact I played Brad in a RHPS reproduction. Gotta say this story is 1000% spot on 😈😈

Absolutely loved this story. Would love to read a continuation

One of the things that makes this story sooooo 🔥 (aside from Freya having a huge she-cock!) is the coercion factor. Janet, and then Brad, fall to Freya's dominance, eventually surrendering all of their holes to her lust.