All Comments on 'Holiday Tension'

Excellent story!!! This is one of two of my favorites for the Winter Holiday contest.

Writing was great and it wasn't crazy outlandish like others but I prefer more heat! Slow burn stories are still good and I'm sure this one will be a hit! Definite 5 stars

I am not sure how it goes beyond the first page but the gender rolls in this story are a bit offputting.

I enjoyed this story greatly. I would be interested in seeing if there is more to be told, or if this is a one and done. Either way, well done!

Outstanding work! The build up was so good.

I found this one a bit difficult to follow. Quite slow in the development.

Loved this story took a while for the sex at the start it was a little confusing but I hope this is a one and done 5 stars

I don't know if this was intentional but there's an off-putting red-pill vibe in the way you approached the D/s dynamic. It's a little hard to suspend disbelief when when you say that a young man of 18 years old suddenly took control of the home environment, and worse when you point out that his sister didn't agree with that but ended up having to go along with it for some reason. Characterizing the dynamic as something linked to being Italian is another odd choice. If you're going to make a choice that will make your readers uncomfortable - and it's fine to do that, sometimes - own it, don't pass it off as "well, reader, you know how those Italians are..."

I like it, a nice buildup to the inevitable conclusion!! They all seemed to be finding their ways

Awesome story the build up to the incest was perfect loved how mom and daughter agreed how to share him and the sex with his sister you skipped to much info and with mother could have used more also. You need to continue with this story and maybe mother and sister become pregnant!!!!! 5 Stars