All Comments on 'Holidays at the Hot Springs'

Five Stars Great Story RW

Re-reading this wonderful tale that you tell so well.

What a delightful tale told so well. I was at first worried, the attention to detail can often be a mask for poor story line but not in this case!! Well done ~ thank you!

Can you hear the sarcasm? One star. I'd give less because of the cultural appropriation and mutilation of sacred mythology, but unfortunately one is the lowest option.

I really liked this. The small details made a lot of the story for me. Admittedly, I began to lose interest when it mentioned cheating, but it was more of just a swinging style kink than actual cheating in the end. Its awesome to see folklore characters from other cultures like this, and I'm already wishing that you had a continuation up with the party they talk about at the end there.

well done ! A great read and I learned a few things as well !!! Excellent job !

Stephen J

Excellent writing. Very good story.

I like the creativity in this story. Great job!

Because then you actually understand the Japanese words.

a gifted story teller, Many Thanks!

unusual story. I enjoyed reading it very, very, much. Thank you for the effort and my enjoyment.

An unusual tale, told expertly. Five stars, when six would suffice.

That was hot, even the snow woman. very good stand alone story. well written. thank you

A stirring and engaging tail - er, tale. Nicely done.