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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
a little confusing, TD

You switch back and forth from Present tense to Past.... a little confusing

BIG surprise when she wrote back, immediately, "Yes!" had no idea where the plot was headed...

Abrupt ending.... no idea where you are headed with this...or even IF you are....

Good description... she likes being called and treated like a slut, but not verbally assaulted....so, lots of possibilities...

HotdiggitydogHotdiggitydog4 months ago

Very hot. Very well written. It got me hard. 5 stars

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