All Comments on 'Holly Pt. 02'

hopely maybe pt.3. super hot mate...

... that it could be better than Part 1. I could actually smell the narrative ! Improved, when I wasn't sure it was possible.

Absolutely one of the best things I've ever read here.

This particular scenario is so erotic, as another comment almost puts it, there is an intoxicating aroma emanating from your sentences.

This chapter was so well written, the way in which she controlled him was phenomenal. You did an amazing job with your wording, my god the repetition was so hot. Damn, looking forward to reading more of your works - and don't be shy to throw in some more scat.

I'm here to tell you to not stop this story, please post part. 3!!!