All Comments on 'Holly Would'

by Heaven17

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
This is an erotica site and

that was erotic. Better written than most, taking some time to make it seem possible.

droogedroogeover 7 years ago
It Rarely Gets As Raunchy As This... Wow

5* Heaven17 I never give 5* to anybody but it is evident to me that I haven't read a posting that equals yours. You kept the sexual tension taunt for every sentence of your story. Thank you, that was magic, and I look forward to learning if your writing is always so raunchy!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
HOT

Finally, a good hot sexy story instead of all this hate women crap.

THANKS

Impo_64Impo_64over 7 years ago
If that's what they like...

If that's what they like...And if they are both in agreement with it...Who can criticize? well written...No need to know if they had done it before, or if not, why the husband suddenly decided to try it...2*

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great Story!

THIS is what Loving Wives should be about, Husbands and wives having wild fun together, not the cheating and revenge crap that is so common. Want to read more about these two.

loboss2loboss2over 7 years ago
Great Story

Thanks, I think its very well written. Adding the tube top for the wife...priceless!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Wow, . . .

that was pretty stupid.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
She blew them much more than a kiss...

She blew them much more than a kiss...Maybe next time the husband will blow them too...

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
5

annony is a old ugly fat fag fool!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
re: anonymous-5

Describing yourself?

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Yikes.

That was just bad, I think you would suck a dick, bitch.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
wonderful!

Wow, Holly is hot! I wish my wife were that bold...

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
1*

Vote 1* for 𝐓𝐇𝐄 𝐅𝐀𝐓 𝐃𝐔𝐌𝐁 𝐓𝐑𝐀𝐍𝐍𝐘 𝐖𝐇𝐎𝐑𝐄™ (that's what her clients call her) aka BONNIE/VASTIE aka NEEDYOU200 aka ANON!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

I'm like the guy in the story, I like tits, these ones swinging back and forth and slapping on the door and everyone playing with them. Hot

Larkfield61Larkfield61over 7 years ago
A slut in the making

Great story, l love watching men use my wife like that when she's dogging. A great way to spend an evening.

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