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Click hereHolly tensed, surprised, dug her nails into my back, clawing me, leaving deep, angry, fuck filled passionate scratches. Within two minutes, Holly stiffened up, panting, babbling, then screaming in a primal, animalistic lust grabbed my neck, and drowned me in a kiss as she hit the summit of an all enveloping orgasm.
"FFFUUUUCCCCKKKKKKKKKKK!!!!!!!!"
Not letting her sensitive pussy get a break, I grabbed her shoulders, and using the the wall for leverage, forced Holly down on my cock, and erupted inside her. The explosion of our ogasm made me dizzy, week at the knees, and we slid down the wall, and collapsed in a panting, sweaty, cum covered heap. Somewhere, during the night, we managed to slither to our bed, and pass out.
I awoke to the bright sunshine streaming in the window, and rolled over to see my beautiful Holly dressed.
A knock at the door interrupted us. A messenger was the with a packet from the law firm I had retained for my divorce. It seemed the parents of the young man my soon to be ex-wife had been fucking was furious she was using their son. A couple of well placed calls from that young man's father, and my lawyer's office, and an emergency divorce had been granted. I hadn't really asked for anything but some things left to me by my Mom, and Grandmother. Holly and I would start our life together with our own things, our own life, our own memories, and our own love.
2 hours later, "Holly!"
She ran into the room, and I saw that I left her suitcase on the bed.
"What is THAT for?!"
I placed two airline tickets for New York City in the suitcase. Holly's eyes opened wide. New York is one of the states where we could be married. After hugs, tears of joy, and squeals of delight, we were off to O'Hare, and our flight. 3 days later, I was back to work. Time later for a proper Honeymoon.
"And they lived happily ever after..." would have been the perfect ending. However, shocked family, and friends were to be expected. Most stayed in our lives, and accepted what they had seen with their own eyes. Some couldn't and drifted out of our life. We knew this going in. I've never given a second thought to our love. It has been said that you only have one chance at your true love. No way was mine going anywhere.
Author's note: First story I've submitted on this site, and the first one in 11 years anywhere. Comments are welcome. I hope you enjoyed it. Cheers!
- COMMENTS
Rancher46over 1 year agoWell just found this story and loved it. It is a shame that this is the only story this author has written as was excellent. 5/5
Anonymousover 2 years agoWell I did enjoy it , so thanks for hoping I would ! Now , returning the favor , here is my hope for you , I hope you keep writing erotic stories on this site , as you’re quite good at it ! Your story keep me enthralled and thoroughly entertained ! 5stars from me (wish I could vote more than 5,you’d be the overstocked recipient!)
Tw0Cr0wsover 7 years agore:
cousins IS NOT INCEST! First cousins CAN legally marry!!!
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Only in some states, in others it is incest.
But true about the risk of birth defects.
It isn't really any worse than the risk when 40 year old woman has a child, and they haven't made that illegal.
Sampkyangover 7 years agojust to vote. I marvel at authors that call cousins incest, it's NOT or come up with one not able to have kids so there will be no freak babies. IF brother and sis fuck get preggers the chance of anomallies is just slightly above the national average <2%. IF there are no genetic maladies they can fuck for generations and NEVER produce a freak!!! do a little bit of fucking research dumb asses....
MysTreeover 7 years agoOK, so the story needs a little cleaning up to go from good to excellent.
The beginning doesn't tie in. The boss knows of the marital problems and Rick is a wreck but when we get to this point again in the narrative, the very day he discovers the problem with wifey Holly enters in and saves his heart, he is happy and proposing. This does not jive with the opening.
Rick seems to only have "one game" in the bedroom and all women respond to it EXACTLY the same way. Your love scenes seem almost copy and paste. That kills the readers mood and emotional investment in your tale instantly as the writer appears to have grown bored with their own creation and lazy to offer variety in the description.
The diatribe of useless information about the specks and gas mileage of Ricks cars in forced tangents that add nothing to the story needs to go. (see what I mean?) I would suggest more about Holly, or their link, or basically anything character building.
The ending seemed too rushed for the amount of detail and background you provided. Background should not be the majority of Holly's Heart, yet it is. Flesh out the cousins' story and commitment. It is unnaturally fast and "wrapped up", again like you got bored with the story, and if the writer comes off bored with it, the reader will be too.
It has the potential to be great, but needs more love and attention from you. Do you read your stories aloud before you post? It helps you catch this stuff.
horny2doitover 7 years agoThis is surely one intense story but a beautiful message when Rick and Holly finally marry each other, as they have been soul mates all their lives. Yes, another chapter would be great !! Thank you.
PS: Got to include some new Hot Sex too :)
gakhaover 7 years agoReally enjoyed the story and your style. Could do with a little more attention to grammar etc and the slight repetitiveness of the sex scenes with the protagonist repeatedly taking women who are sensitive and asking him to stop.
