All Comments on 'Holy Matrimony'

rape. sexism and perversion of religion. Disgusting. Sorry all appendages down.

great

loove this

Love it

LOVE IT!!

I have to agree to Motherlessone77 . This story is not how this world should be

Really disgusting . i don't have something against a little religion but it never should be used to oppress

anyone . Female Male Lesbian Gay etc .

I didn't even make it past the Deuteronomy 22:5 quote before I had to stop reading this garbage. I'm a Christian and I found your characterization of my faith highly offensive. You should have placed an additional disclaimer at the opening clearly stating that your depiction of Christianity isn't factual and should not be an indictment of any particular denomination.

It's entirely possible that may not have been your intention. But it's still on your shoulders because you have the option to edit this and add the correction. If you don't, then it's obvious that you were malicious intentionally.

It's the same theme over and over again with your works, and complete misses every time. You have a way of depicting relationships that end up on crime shows. The works aren't compelling both story wise and as erotica except for a niche few that likely have never seen a woman aside from their mothers.

5stars

mmmmmmhhhhhh

your mind is so hot mr writer

this was so hot it was so hot how they trained her into a perfect domisticated fucktoy broodmare wife .so kinky naughty and hot with a tint of religious possessive male dominant twist yum using religion to make her hot and submit to her husbands desires

wow wow wow

why do haters comment about story be rapey and violent its clearly mentioned its non con

why do you read it when non con is not your cup of tea

i really loved it it was yummy please write more

5 stars

Love this story. Please write a sequel!

I love this story!

You need to write more! I love how James and Bella got married

Really love this story ;)

I can see why this can be offensive, but it's just a fantasy. For context, I am a woman and in no way would I want this happening to me for real, but as a fantasy I like it!

Great, hot story - well written.

I'd probably have preferred a bit more realistic setting (the congregation with all the women kneeling was a bit over the top for example), but still liked the fantasy.

I really don't ge, why people are offended by such a thing. It's a fantasy. Read something else if you don't like the premises of a story. That's like homophobes complaining about gay stories - totally pointless.

Beautiful, hot and sexy story!

The relationship and build up between James & Bella is fire!