All Comments on 'Home Alone'

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And the ending was rather abrupt -- the only thing that dropped it from five to four stars, for me.

What a great story, I hope there will be more chapters as this was a pleasure to read. 5/5

Wonderful story!

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You write nice. Write more stories.

But please ... why did you end like that? your story did not need a shock at the end. It was continuing pleasantly, that shock interrupted the story and the emotion. Like you made a perfect clay pot and at the end broke it ... !

Overall, nice story.

(Sorry, I'm not native English speaker)

I enjoyed the unexpected plot twist at the end. was a better ending than I expected.

Awesome plot, this got me real hard and horny

Too fast with the kids practically jumping into sex together as soon as the parents leave. Especially with them both being virgins and not knowing each other at all. Other than that, a good story. 4/5

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