All Comments on 'Home by the Sea'

I loved the intensity in this.I could feel and see everything,his terror as he fights desperately to get to the door,fantastic! well done.Thanks for sharing!!

You painted a very macabre picture. Very atmospheric and certainly worthy of Hallowe'en. Thanks for the read!

Scary stuff! Sometimes people write music to go with a story -- this story invoked the music, twisting like eaum & yang. A black velvet complementary work.

Well done, Dark.

Excellent job on this one, I really enjoyed it. Good luck in the contest.

That was absolutely awesome! Chilling!

I don't usually read horror stories but this one is well worth reading. It's that perfect blend of human frailty and terror that makes horror stories so compelling at times.

Loved the story!