All Comments on 'Home for Dinner'

by Jesse1369

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MyVinnyMyVinnyover 9 years ago
Keep it up!

I would definitely like to see more of this.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
wow

Great flow the whole thing reads very well "that is some good stuff there" WOW

oldwayneoldwayneabout 13 years ago
2 Stars for pity's sake!

Please, please get an editor. Is English really your first language?

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Lousy

"God, won't that bell ever ring!"

I would suggest you look up the definition of exclamation point and the definition of question mark. I should not be surprised because it seems the exclamation point is your main punctuation.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

!!!!!!!!!!!!!

!!!!!!!

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 13 years ago
A good erotic story

I can only think that this was just a mistaken double post of the same story, as I only skimmed through the second go around.

A nice hot and erotic affair is building between him and his daughter. Too bad he didn't get to fuck her, that would have been hot to read about, especially since she is a small woman and her daddy is a big man.

Her little cunny could get stretched out if he takes her as much as she wants him to.

Thanks for the hot read.

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