All Comments on 'Home for Horny Monsters Ch. 006'

Rude and power hungry, to bad he can't move the house and all the monsters to a better town. And now they are going to use blood magic on him, i really hope annabelle that you have thought up some punishment for them..

No pun intended. Truly entertaining. My only criticism is that the chapters aren't posted often enough! Lol. Wish I had half your talent. Keep up the good work! Btw, I like ham and pineapple pizza, so the MC can suck it. Lol

Another amazing chapter to this amazing story, I am absolutely in love with this world you created with Mike and all of the girls, and I am looking forward to see where it goes, I've been impatiently checking literotica since you submitted the story to see when it would be put up and I found it around 3:30 and dove right in. Again another amazing chapter in this story

You did an amazing job with this chapter. I'm really glad that you gave us some insight to the houses past. Now Mike knows he had better start getting his shit together or he's going to end up dead real fast. You also hinted that the society is after something in particular not just the monster girls. Now that got my attention so I will file that away for now. I was happy to see you posted a new chapter but was sad that it was so short. So as I normally say hope you post another new chapter soon and good luck.

As others have said.

I like the way the story is slowly coming together, with the evil forces being explained.

I also look forward to discovering what turned the Mandragora from the carnivorous pet and unwanted body disposer to the ravaging beastie we saw in the earlier chapter.

Lue

This is a phenomenal story and I can't wait for more! I feel really bad for Naia and Tink though. Perhaps in the future we can learn a little bit more about the Mandragora, like if it's sentient, a dryad's home, or whatever?

Loving what you have written. Keep at it. ☺️

You are an excellent writer, keep the story going. Can't wait for the next chapter in the lives of the people in the house and the magic it holds to be reveiled. Waiting paitently

More please.

This has become my favorite story, and dying to find out what happens. I can hardly wait for the rest

Just loving each of these parts of the tapestry you are weaving!

not to sound critical, but I don't really like this chapter turning into Little Shop of Horrors.....

As always, another wonderful chapter in this exciting series. I eagerly await chapter 7!

more please.. just longer please.

Keep it coming,a good read.I hope nothing happens too anyone in the house.

Annabelle, here you have the opportunity to stand among giants. This story may grow to be worthy of Tefler, manyeyedhydra, FinalStand, and I would already put you on a level with Ahazura.

I am enjoying the story. Can’t wait for the next chapter.

Another worthy installment Annabelle, looking forward to new chapters 😇

Keep 'em comin'! I'm still hungry! FEED ME MORE! FEED ME, SEYMOUR!

Please let this new crystal, blood monster girl switch sides and join the House. Think that would be an interesting twist; Mike convincing this girl or offering her a life away from the Witches. Just an idea.

Awesome chapter as always. Poor Tink but as least she happy now with Mike. 5 Stars is not enough

Story going great. I hope you continue it quickly.

Hey Annabelle - love your writing. Love the plot and am waiting for the next installment.

I'm excited to see where this is going to go. I hope you keep writing.

Will stand alone without the sex but I love the sex😇😘

I am so in love with this series. I do hope you continue writing. As i ststed before, I'm for you writing another 20 or more chapters. Thank you for taking the time to give joy to others.

Love!! What a way to lay some background!! Hope he finds more monsters in the next chapter!! Please don’t stop!

Loved this installment can’t wait for more

I just found this story today, and I have to say, i'm really loving it! Aside from a few pronoun errors here and there (and not many) it's well written. I can't wait to read more, and see just what other secrets the house has to offer.

(Just my speculation, but i'm thinking the clock is a mimic :P Will see eventually.)

I absolutely can't wait for the next chapter! Such a good read every time, wish there were a few more heated scenes though ;)

Great story! Please keep them coming, it’s amazing!

Hope you post a new chapter soon

Thanks for sharing

I love this story, I'm sure a lot of people do I'm just writing to see how much longer

I love the premise and the characters. Very good setup and execution. And the sex scenes are amazing. I check at least a few times a week for updates. I love this series. Please don’t stop. There is so much potential in this story for more plot development and super sexy, non-human sex. Every time I reread the chapters it never fails to turn me on

Keep it coming! Set up a patreon!

Thank you for this story, it is really something different in the monster girl genre and well-written! Keep it coming.

Just wow. This whole series is so good. Ever discover something you LOVE and binge it until you discover that it's incomplete and you now have to WAIT until the next installment? That's exactly my problem now. haha

So please, please, pretty please continue soon.

And great job on the series as a whole so far. It's masterfully written, with a great cast of unique and entertaining characters. Loving it so much. Thanks. :)

Please say you are going to finish this story . . .? I am soo very invested in these characters and want to see where you take them next! You are an incredible story-teller with a very vivid imagination! Please keep writing!!!

Echoing the others, almost unanimous in their praise, I am enjoying your work so far. I also agree that it is a bit frustrating to discover a new story and get sucked into it, only to find it is a work in progress. But, life is harsh sometimes, and we readers must not badger the creators of such gifts to write faster!

I am invested in reading several works that are in progress, some of which may never be concluded (case in point, Final Stand and his many excellent incomplete works). My favorite story has been dragging on for SIX YEARS and is only now nearing a climax.

My point is, I can't create this wonderful fiction, and I have no right to whimper and moan that you write too slowly, when you have given me the golden opportunity to peek over your shoulder as you create your world of wonderment. I must be patient and politely thankful for your gift. Not pester you and become a distraction to you.

Thank you. Please keep up this excellent story with no thought of going faster to please your many fans. Do not allow their cries to cause you to alter your style in any way. Rushing the work to publish on a timetable can only result in lower quality. The result will be reduced satisfaction for your readers, and ultimately, for you as a writer.

She subjects a character to a vivid rape memory then tells him he'll get over it because the experience was borrowed. Oh he's "fine"...

As the cherry on the cake, he must 'never forget that forced-to-penetrate isn't real rape'. This is especially rich coming from a character who forced herself on him sexually in the first chapter.

I don't get the impression this exercise in gaslighting was intentional.

I like the writing of whole story. And in a way it reminds me of the old Xanth series.

Oh love it all especially the story aspect of this.

Sometimes an author gets so caught up in creating more and more, layer upon layer, losing track of the initial concept. Please avoid the trap of going so far into the deep end you paint yourself into an unmanageable morass.

Did you need Garrett? Is the Society necessary? Don't you already have enough balls in the air?

I don't think a few paragraphs have ever so effectively turned me off of a story I was enjoying. This chapter was so out of sync with the previous five I couldn't help but wonder if it was even written by the same person.

I mean, up until now it had been a fairly lighthearted tale with some emotional backstory and personal suffering. Then out of nowhere there's rape, intense violence, and death. Made all the more disturbing by the way it's just sort of glossed over as if it wasn't a complete tonal shift. Honestly, did you not notice while writing how much darker these scenes were?

I'll give it another chapter or two in the hopes that this was just a one time thing, but if this represents a more permanent change in the writing style, then this is definitely not the kind of story I signed up for.

I too found this a dark chapter illwind. However, there is an underlying plot that is unfolding as the hero learns more about where he lives.

I want the light hearted interactions back but I also look forward to seeing where the struggle between “good and evil” leads.

I wasn't expecting a flashback, let alone one as dark as this, but I must say that I was entranced. Emily's backstory was suitably fascinating and horrifying and ultimately quite sad. While I'll echo some sentiments looking back to some of the lighter previous chapters, the character development and worldbuilding present in this chapter feel vital for the story you've set up. I'm curious to see where this dark and twisted tale will go, and looking forward to him unearthing more of the house's secrets and denizens.

He trusts her and she had him experience being raped be a man and begging for it?

Itll be helpful he understands not trusting people or him wrong it can go? He already had his issues and scars towards one who was supposed to show live and care hes dealing with. Before and after were fine with verbal detail.

Says i trust you and experiences that then shrugs it off and gos on with the day. Id be ultra livid.

What Naia? You think i should experience being beaten and raped into comprehending how serious this is? Great teaching methods, lets have kids im sure youll be a great mother.

Back in the first chapters (was it chapter 1 or 2?) I called what they were: Her curiosity about the bushes he fell into, and the prick on his finger, when they shook hands, it all lines up with preparation for sympathetic magic.

And now I'm 99% sure they are witches.

Anyways, I love your series. And I'm impressed on how much research you must have done to write this story

Did someone hit you over the head or something?

We've gone from a somewhat wholesome series to rape, suffering and the goddamn nymph forcing the mc to experience how it is to be raped.

At least give a warning before throwing that shit at us.

More great characters added to the story, loved the Abella introduction and her shyness about her fetish. The scene with the fire elemental was very tense. But that first sex scene with Cecilia rivals Tinks first scene for the best so far. Elizabeth and Sarah deserve anything they get coming to them. The details you go into to describe the characters is what really sets this story apart from most others. Your details paint a clear picture of what they look like and make it easy to picture them in my imagination.

So far I’ve really enjoyed the book and it’s really interesting

I’m only speculating here but with the drop of blood I have a feeling either a clone is gonna be made or Emily is gonna be resurrected with her mind controled by Elizabeth

There's a lot in this chapter. Poor Emily and Tink. Bastard Garrett. The villians Sarah and Elizabeth are starting to take shape. Plus Garrett is still around.... Crap. That's not going to end well. Add to that shadowly figures connected to them.

Still, I like the growth of Mike and the deepening bonds between everyone. Well done!

There house and it's inhabitants will have their hands full!

Excellent (I know I overuse it but the authors are very good) character development, the bad guys are really bad almost Japanese in their evilness. They good guys are very flawed. This is really shaping up to be a Well developed story.

Please keep writing

The deep dive into the Emily’s past, tender and shocking as it was, makes your storytelling deeply compelling.

I am 100% hooked, cannot put it down.

Please put a rape trigger warning on chapters like this! 😡

Hate rape stories.

The plot thickens! This is getting even better every chapter.

Not only a great story, but the erotica is amazing as well. You have kept me interested the whole time cant wait to read more.

Story is great and enjoying it, but content warning for rape would be nice, especially as it came out of nowhere.

"The threat of being forced to fuck is a woman's curse"? Really? That's some feminist sexist drivel from atop a soapbox, but great plot overall.

I love the story so far, but would REALLY appreciate a warning if there's going to be any more rape scenes. It's a lot harder to handle when you don't know it's coming.

"The threat of being forced to fuck is a woman's curse".

Mevermind the fact that Mike says to Naia in the second chapter that she almost raped him.

Rape is everyone's curse, women and men.

Witches...

Woah people are whack down here. Acting like rape or warning of rape is an agenda??

The rape was a sudden turn but as soon as he put her under the spell I expected it to happen considering his demeanor. Also when he ordered he to blow him the rape started next paragraph so it could have been avoided. Warning would be good. Never know when somebody can be fucked by it tho.

So.. pizza girl is gonna see some monsters? Future ally or a plant? She already walked into the house. What about that lawyer lady? Plot thickens.

There is nothing more disgusting than rape! I knew a bright vibrant young woman in college who was raped by a group of guys who drugged her. Somehow she blamed herself for it happening. She slowly slipped into madness and finally suicide in spite of her religious beliefs. It is no joke! Otherwise a good story.

To all the folks seeing this as a rape fantasy - let me give you my point of view...

Yes, this is about rape. And if it was depicted in a somehow positive or excusable way, I might agree with you.

But it's not. It's depicted as what rape is - brutal, degrading and cruel. The victims are shown as being massively hurt - one becomes a recluse, another suffers brain damage.

As much as I hate it - rape is a fact of life. As is murder. Both destroy lives - and not only that of the direct victim.

And no matter how hard we try - we won't be able to eradicate it entirely. Sorry, but that's the way it is.

There's a difference between promoting rape and _describing_ it...

(Somehow, nobody takes offence when an author describes a murder.)

What the fuck.

Did someone hit you over the head or something?

We've gone from a somewhat wholesome series to rape, suffering and the goddamn nymph forcing the mc to experience how it is to be raped.

At least give a warning before throwing that shit at us.

Were you trying to make your nymph look like a psychopath?

She subjects a character to a vivid rape memory then tells him he'll get over it because the experience was borrowed. Oh he's "fine"...

As the cherry on the cake, he must 'never forget that forced-to-penetrate isn't real rape'. This is especially rich coming from a character who forced herself on him sexually in the first chapter.

I don't get the impression this exercise in gaslighting was intentional

It’s a fantasy, and I’m not offended by where it has gone so far. Rapes happen in real life, in movies, and in novels. Like murder and other horrible things. I’m really surprised at anyone who’s a reader on this site getting wound up about it.

Wow comments section is hot.

Life is savage.

From the fight out of the womb to the fight for everyday breaths.

I had no comments for this chapter until I saw the comments.

This is a life and death situation for the house.

Life is chaos. We all sit on a ball of dirt hurtling through space at thousands of miles per hour waiting to be cooked by a solar flare

Tink is my favorite.

❤️

One of the best stories ever written imo. Excited for more! 😁

Wow Tink to the rescue and by a cringe-worthy solution!

Very enlightening chapter, definitely helps to put things in perspective. Looking forward to reading more and seeing how the new threats are handled and what other house residents introduce themselves. I'm awed by your and your Muse's abilities. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents!

Intriguing...

Rereading. I hadn't noted first time the significance of Garret(RIP) saying he'd already amassed a collection of monsters.

I wonder if we'll ever meet them, possibly in hiding or imprisoned somewhere...

I started reading this series expecting your average, run-of-the-mill monster girl harem story. Instead I finding this is an actually fully thought out, professional level, free novel. There is a bloody good reason this series tops the Literotica charts.

This is just an emotional Rollercoaster , one of the greatest one i'e read

I’ve been reading close to non-stop for many months now and I’m finding gems like this that haven’t had a comment for months & months. Can’t understand it. There ought to be a way to advertise stories like this.

Bill S.

Another extremely interesting chapter.

Great story that keeps twisting, it keeps me wondering what’s next?

I'm late to the party so I apologize if you've answered this question. If the Monsters are not just in the house, but all over the property, why isn't the whole property warded against intruders?

Fantastic

Such excellent characterization and story! Really enjoying this so far!

These stories are good. I enjoy the sex (obviously but i like the characters… and visualize myself as Mike… very cool.

Although this chapter was a tad confusing, I now have a little understanding of the block everyone is experiencing.