All Comments on 'Home for Horny Monsters Ch. 010'

Annabelle, again captivated and the ending comes leaving one sitting on the edge of ones stool reading the screen. Wow.

But your writing is the @#! $%&*@ BOMB

Paps

I had saved a chapter here or there to maybe come back and comment on. But this one I can't not write something.

Oh yeah. Loving this series. Part of me is glad I waited. Having such a glut of amazing stories to read is wonderful.

He really is perfect for this place. Even the broken parts of him fitting like a bizarre and tragic lock and key. So wonderful that he has some good women around him to keep him well. Looking forward to more (and luckily, I can just keep going. Right now in fact if I choose.) So lovely.

Thank you for your fantastic work. Be well ^.^

Annabelle,

Always remain humble, but never EVER doubt yourself! Your skills easily match those who’ve been #1 on the NYT Best Sellers list numerous times: the Warden, Wright, Mead & more!

You deserve the praise & I hope you have many more stories in the works for the future. Please, don’t ever stop sharing your imagination!

Sarah is screwed.

Oh wow, each new chapter is even better! Thanks annabelle!

Every Chapter has been great! I have always wondered how authors put little teasers like the doll early on, only to find out it is a huge plot twist later. love your story!

This took a twist that was unexpected and very satisfying. Thank you. On to the next chapter.

It seems to me that Lily lost the wager as soon as she flew away after her and Mike's first coupling. The contract was for her to make her body available at all times, and flying away violated that term even if Mike wasn't insisting that she remain.

Figured this is a good spot of reprieve to comment. This is becoming one of my favorite stories on here, and I'm basically skipping the sex scenes in favor of the story story. Which is like 70% why it's one of my faves.

Extremely well done! The sex is the icing on the story cake!

Read the first 10 chapters. And just had to pause briefly to comment. Absolutely in love with Your writing. It flows magically from chapter to chapter. Love the content and the characters. all some of my favourite types of demons. Cant wait to read the rest. Thank You so much. Stuart

Well this saga I really easy to pick up and extremely difficult to put down another great chapter thank you very much

Truly a good story, with so much to learn. Interested to find out how Beth and Dana continue to fit into the storyline. Finn

By accident I happened on your stories. I have never really cared for this Genre before. But I read your first chapter and I was totally hooked! I am binging each chapter any spare time I get. That does not mean I am speed reading, I am savoring each chapter. You are Fantastic, Pat

I will probably be saying this frequently for the next month, but WOW!!! I am thoroughly enjoying this incredible story and I am simply amazed with your imagination and your writing skills!

Addictive!! Thanks for the great series.

I am absolutely LOVING!!!! this story...I only just found it but I've spent the last 2 days reading all of your stuff and I just cannot put it down in absolute love!! :D

I love the premise. An old house with magic and secrets. Sex magic just makes it more exciting.

up until the dreamscape this was truly excellent but, to be brutally honest i did not like this at all. Perhaps its because i suffer from depression and do not do drams well. they haunt me, badly. Hopefully your story shall go back to what it was...interesting, entertaining and an enjoyment to read

I love it thoroughly

Keep them coming!!!

Really appreciate your work, thanks for sharing!

Really great stories

Why am I finding my favorite fugue-plane writing on this site? Well done, well done.

I have a bunch of books on kindle and I am reading this free story instead, so much fun

Thank you for your writing, nice stuff as always.

Very imaginative! And very sympathetic. Great story.

I was sooo anticipating Lily getting fucked with her own cock. I wanted more of that though, it was over all too quickly. Also the intimate/tender stuff melting her defenses was great, wanted more of that too. Still, well done. I came. :)

I want to rave about this story but I lack the words... I read a lot, like really a lot, and this is by far one of the best stories I've ever read, the sex part being simply icing on the glorious cake. I can't say everything you write agrees with my personal tastes, but even what I don't like, you make me enjoy! This, to me, is perhaps the greatest compliment a storyteller can ever get. Please keep on writing this story!

Just wow.

Such an intense chapter

Again well done and thank you

You pack more interest into a chapter than many authors manage in a whole book.

How in the hell do you come up with such amazing plots and resolutions to them??!!

To tell you that this story is fantastic would be redundant, but I am running out of ways to describe how enthralled I am by your storytelling.

All I can do, is to again thank you for sharing this with us!

awesome !!

Comeuppance and redemption wrapped up in a wonderful series of revelations!

Great chapter!

Although I have given you five stars on every chapter, I waited to see how this story developed before commenting. You really have a flair for plot development, character development, and of course great sex scenes! I very much look forward to the rest of the chapters!

This story deserved to be a tv series, animated or live action. Maybe need a brainstorming on the title but THIS DESERVES TO BE A SERIES

I really wish someone BIG notices this story and develops this into a live series. Might need a brainstorming for title. THIS DESERVES TO BE A LIVE SERIES!!!!!!!!

The story is interesting in a comedic sort of way. Being so far off from the true legends of the characters you have included so far.

I skip through most of the eroticism.

Keep weaving !

Please, never think of yourself as an ordinary horse, a hack (look up derivation of hack, if you don't already know it).

You are more a Pegasus, a horny unicorn, or centaur than a hack. Remember, too, that even ordinary horses are amazing beings. Some humans are just far too quick to blame other beings for being true to themselves instead of being what the human(s) want.

Your characters are captivating, surprising, original, multidimensional, and a delight to experience. They are nuanced.

Neither your characters nor your descriptions of things/situations break the spell of your writing. Your pacing is very good, and you gently slip in a bit of life wisdom along with all the exotic candy.

Thank you.

Just wanted to say as usual you knocked it out of the park. Amazing as always. Just wanted to say in conjunction with my comment on the previous chapter...people who feel they must put you down berrate you and otherwise verbally bash your writing have nothing better to do with their time and are just jealous of your achievements. Ignore them. Theres a difference between constructive criticism and out right trolling/bullying. That being said...to me you a better writter than stephen king and R.L. Stein...right up there, in genius and eloquence, with alfred hitchcock, sax rohmer, and C.S. Lewis. Your amazing keep it up...your my idol

I continue to be impressed. The story has love at its heart and that is always a gift.

Was hoping he would use dream magic to expand himself inside the succubus. But still was far from disappointed. Great writing

Love your story! Great writing and characterizations! Also, excellent dialogue. Thank you!

Love love love your story, you are so talented and I cant wait to meet more monsters!!! Its a same I cant physically put your book with all my other wonderful books. You deserve top shelf ratings!!

Really enjoying this story.

I came just for spicy time but didn't expect a whole fleshed out mythology with incredible descriptions in a surrealist nightmare void climactic battle with twists and turns. Like if monster musume was written by JRR Tolkien.

is there a way you could publish this as a physical book? i would love to buy it, your writing is beautiful and you're one of ah

hell talented writer!

5 stars, but a bit wordy. I’m still entrapped by this tale but I’m ready for a new scenario.

Bill S.

I remember now, this is the place where it starts going downhill, started strong but flopped in the first 100 meters.

Going from strength to strength

Are there any orc women in this story before I start reading?

I love these. Keep up the great work

I hope you see this comment. Your writing in these last chapters has been so good I put my pants back on and deeply enjoyed this story almost philosophically or something. You captured the workings of the mind in a way that normal people can comprehend so vividly.

Mmmm, Lily finally got her cumuppance, now it's Sarah's turn to get nailed. And I can't wait for her well deserved hosing. Then maybe her mother and the rest of those society bitches will get theirs. Mike may want to start a harem of witches.

I read the first ten chapters. So far it´s been great, thank you. 5 stars obviously.

I especially like that Mike thinks his way out of problems instead of simpy fucking into submission everything he comes across. Yes, there is sex, but it is intelligent, caring sex (not to mention very hot!) , not just raw fulfilment of desires. Also, since I don´t like anal sex scenes with women, I thought that pegging in chapter 9 was a welcome change.

I also like that each chapter is relatively short. When I see a multi-part story with a chapter stretching over 15 or more pages, I usually close it immediately.

I know it´s far too late since over 100 chapters are out now, but I still like to voice two wishes: First, the story needs a second and possibly a third male character with sex scenes. Harem stories tend to get extremely boring with repetition after a short time. So far, you managed to avoid this well, but I can´t see this continuing for too long. Second, slow down the pace a little. I don´t need an even-bigger threat every two installments, this is not a superhero story. Let Mike explore the grounds without any impending threat, getting to know (not nevessarily fucking) a few more inhabitants, including male ones.

Again, thank you for your story and keep up the great work.

So far I really have to say I'm enjoying the heck out of this story. I am looking forward to continuing to eeas.aboit the life of Mike Radley and the monster girls he loves.

Mike should have figured her out.

Incredible story I'm finding it difficult to leave a comment because I want to continue the journey as soon as I can <3 - please excuse the anonymity as I have not opened an account but this could well be the trigger to do so

There’s something I love about consensual sexual healing. Keep it up Annabelle, this has been a fantastic story and I’m not even a tenth of the way through based on the current number of chapters.

I like urban fantasy and these are good reading, the erotica is just a plus. :) Good job.

Damn, that was a fine plot twist. I didn't see it coming but I loved it ! Onto the next chapter and once again 5 stars.

Nice work with the story. I was expecting he duplicated himself, but this was better.

Been enjoying, thanks for writing!

Great story!

Hmmm, ms. Writerannabelle: You … are …. lit ….. 🔥

I am used to reading like 3, 4 stories simultaneously, 📚 here on Literotica.

But these 💕 lovely ¿monster? girls and their Mike, I want to know what happens next. 🤼‍♀️🍟🌬☔️🌞🥰 I am a loving it 🌷

I love your devious mind. Ya must’ve heard it at least a couple of hundred times already: you, milady are a great writer, kudos. ✨🌺

I just wanted to say: Thank you 🤗

Great story, keep up the good work

This is my second read and it confirms that Lily is my favourite character along with another that will be revealed further down the storyline. Both are very complex, with personality, emotions and flaws. Not to say that the others are less well written, but these two touch me deeper (ok now I realise that saying that about Lily MAY be a bit revealing ;) ).

I love your work and I'm so grateful you're sharing it with us b

In the last few chapters I did stumble across a couple of grammar errors. Choosing the wrong word. She couldn't bare it, where she meant she couldn't bear it. Nobody was asking her to get naked.

But I am still giving all your chapters fives.

Love that Naia is so supportive of Mike; a powerful, compassionate, feminine presence!

Great series.

Five stars all the way.

Keep up the good work.

Very clever resolution. Love your storytelling.

Hmmmm..........Lily almost reminds me of a succubus from another work of fiction. Or was she a dryad? Or maybe an ancient master of magic who's tomes of magical theory are still used as the foundations for teaching others over two millennia later? Or perhaps she's all of the above. Trapped souls can make for some very.......interesting situations.