All Comments on 'Home for Horny Monsters Ch. 010'

Hmmmm..........Lily almost reminds me of a succubus from another work of fiction. Or was she a dryad? Or maybe an ancient master of magic who's tomes of magical theory are still used as the foundations for teaching others over two millennia later? Or perhaps she's all of the above. Trapped souls can make for some very.......interesting situations.

Very clever resolution. Love your storytelling.

Great series.

Five stars all the way.

Keep up the good work.

Love that Naia is so supportive of Mike; a powerful, compassionate, feminine presence!

In the last few chapters I did stumble across a couple of grammar errors. Choosing the wrong word. She couldn't bare it, where she meant she couldn't bear it. Nobody was asking her to get naked.

But I am still giving all your chapters fives.

This is my second read and it confirms that Lily is my favourite character along with another that will be revealed further down the storyline. Both are very complex, with personality, emotions and flaws. Not to say that the others are less well written, but these two touch me deeper (ok now I realise that saying that about Lily MAY be a bit revealing ;) ).

I love your work and I'm so grateful you're sharing it with us b

Great story, keep up the good work

Hmmm, ms. Writerannabelle: You … are …. lit ….. 🔥

I am used to reading like 3, 4 stories simultaneously, 📚 here on Literotica.

But these 💕 lovely ¿monster? girls and their Mike, I want to know what happens next. 🤼‍♀️🍟🌬☔️🌞🥰 I am a loving it 🌷

I love your devious mind. Ya must’ve heard it at least a couple of hundred times already: you, milady are a great writer, kudos. ✨🌺

I just wanted to say: Thank you 🤗

Great story!

Been enjoying, thanks for writing!

Nice work with the story. I was expecting he duplicated himself, but this was better.

Damn, that was a fine plot twist. I didn't see it coming but I loved it ! Onto the next chapter and once again 5 stars.

I like urban fantasy and these are good reading, the erotica is just a plus. :) Good job.

There’s something I love about consensual sexual healing. Keep it up Annabelle, this has been a fantastic story and I’m not even a tenth of the way through based on the current number of chapters.

Incredible story I'm finding it difficult to leave a comment because I want to continue the journey as soon as I can <3 - please excuse the anonymity as I have not opened an account but this could well be the trigger to do so

Mike should have figured her out.

So far I really have to say I'm enjoying the heck out of this story. I am looking forward to continuing to eeas.aboit the life of Mike Radley and the monster girls he loves.

I read the first ten chapters. So far it´s been great, thank you. 5 stars obviously.

I especially like that Mike thinks his way out of problems instead of simpy fucking into submission everything he comes across. Yes, there is sex, but it is intelligent, caring sex (not to mention very hot!) , not just raw fulfilment of desires. Also, since I don´t like anal sex scenes with women, I thought that pegging in chapter 9 was a welcome change.

I also like that each chapter is relatively short. When I see a multi-part story with a chapter stretching over 15 or more pages, I usually close it immediately.

I know it´s far too late since over 100 chapters are out now, but I still like to voice two wishes: First, the story needs a second and possibly a third male character with sex scenes. Harem stories tend to get extremely boring with repetition after a short time. So far, you managed to avoid this well, but I can´t see this continuing for too long. Second, slow down the pace a little. I don´t need an even-bigger threat every two installments, this is not a superhero story. Let Mike explore the grounds without any impending threat, getting to know (not nevessarily fucking) a few more inhabitants, including male ones.

Again, thank you for your story and keep up the great work.

Mmmm, Lily finally got her cumuppance, now it's Sarah's turn to get nailed. And I can't wait for her well deserved hosing. Then maybe her mother and the rest of those society bitches will get theirs. Mike may want to start a harem of witches.

I hope you see this comment. Your writing in these last chapters has been so good I put my pants back on and deeply enjoyed this story almost philosophically or something. You captured the workings of the mind in a way that normal people can comprehend so vividly.

I love these. Keep up the great work

Are there any orc women in this story before I start reading?

Going from strength to strength

I remember now, this is the place where it starts going downhill, started strong but flopped in the first 100 meters.

5 stars, but a bit wordy. I’m still entrapped by this tale but I’m ready for a new scenario.

Bill S.

is there a way you could publish this as a physical book? i would love to buy it, your writing is beautiful and you're one of ah

hell talented writer!

I came just for spicy time but didn't expect a whole fleshed out mythology with incredible descriptions in a surrealist nightmare void climactic battle with twists and turns. Like if monster musume was written by JRR Tolkien.

Really enjoying this story.

Love love love your story, you are so talented and I cant wait to meet more monsters!!! Its a same I cant physically put your book with all my other wonderful books. You deserve top shelf ratings!!

Love your story! Great writing and characterizations! Also, excellent dialogue. Thank you!

Was hoping he would use dream magic to expand himself inside the succubus. But still was far from disappointed. Great writing

I continue to be impressed. The story has love at its heart and that is always a gift.

Just wanted to say as usual you knocked it out of the park. Amazing as always. Just wanted to say in conjunction with my comment on the previous chapter...people who feel they must put you down berrate you and otherwise verbally bash your writing have nothing better to do with their time and are just jealous of your achievements. Ignore them. Theres a difference between constructive criticism and out right trolling/bullying. That being said...to me you a better writter than stephen king and R.L. Stein...right up there, in genius and eloquence, with alfred hitchcock, sax rohmer, and C.S. Lewis. Your amazing keep it up...your my idol

Please, never think of yourself as an ordinary horse, a hack (look up derivation of hack, if you don't already know it).

You are more a Pegasus, a horny unicorn, or centaur than a hack. Remember, too, that even ordinary horses are amazing beings. Some humans are just far too quick to blame other beings for being true to themselves instead of being what the human(s) want.

Your characters are captivating, surprising, original, multidimensional, and a delight to experience. They are nuanced.

Neither your characters nor your descriptions of things/situations break the spell of your writing. Your pacing is very good, and you gently slip in a bit of life wisdom along with all the exotic candy.

Thank you.

Keep weaving !

The story is interesting in a comedic sort of way. Being so far off from the true legends of the characters you have included so far.

I skip through most of the eroticism.

I really wish someone BIG notices this story and develops this into a live series. Might need a brainstorming for title. THIS DESERVES TO BE A LIVE SERIES!!!!!!!!

This story deserved to be a tv series, animated or live action. Maybe need a brainstorming on the title but THIS DESERVES TO BE A SERIES

Although I have given you five stars on every chapter, I waited to see how this story developed before commenting. You really have a flair for plot development, character development, and of course great sex scenes! I very much look forward to the rest of the chapters!

Comeuppance and redemption wrapped up in a wonderful series of revelations!

Great chapter!

awesome !!

How in the hell do you come up with such amazing plots and resolutions to them??!!

To tell you that this story is fantastic would be redundant, but I am running out of ways to describe how enthralled I am by your storytelling.

All I can do, is to again thank you for sharing this with us!

You pack more interest into a chapter than many authors manage in a whole book.

Just wow.

Such an intense chapter

Again well done and thank you

I want to rave about this story but I lack the words... I read a lot, like really a lot, and this is by far one of the best stories I've ever read, the sex part being simply icing on the glorious cake. I can't say everything you write agrees with my personal tastes, but even what I don't like, you make me enjoy! This, to me, is perhaps the greatest compliment a storyteller can ever get. Please keep on writing this story!

I was sooo anticipating Lily getting fucked with her own cock. I wanted more of that though, it was over all too quickly. Also the intimate/tender stuff melting her defenses was great, wanted more of that too. Still, well done. I came. :)

Very imaginative! And very sympathetic. Great story.

Thank you for your writing, nice stuff as always.

I have a bunch of books on kindle and I am reading this free story instead, so much fun

Why am I finding my favorite fugue-plane writing on this site? Well done, well done.

Really great stories

Really appreciate your work, thanks for sharing!

Keep them coming!!!

I love it thoroughly

up until the dreamscape this was truly excellent but, to be brutally honest i did not like this at all. Perhaps its because i suffer from depression and do not do drams well. they haunt me, badly. Hopefully your story shall go back to what it was...interesting, entertaining and an enjoyment to read

I love the premise. An old house with magic and secrets. Sex magic just makes it more exciting.

I am absolutely LOVING!!!! this story...I only just found it but I've spent the last 2 days reading all of your stuff and I just cannot put it down in absolute love!! :D

Addictive!! Thanks for the great series.

I will probably be saying this frequently for the next month, but WOW!!! I am thoroughly enjoying this incredible story and I am simply amazed with your imagination and your writing skills!

By accident I happened on your stories. I have never really cared for this Genre before. But I read your first chapter and I was totally hooked! I am binging each chapter any spare time I get. That does not mean I am speed reading, I am savoring each chapter. You are Fantastic, Pat

Truly a good story, with so much to learn. Interested to find out how Beth and Dana continue to fit into the storyline. Finn

Well this saga I really easy to pick up and extremely difficult to put down another great chapter thank you very much

Read the first 10 chapters. And just had to pause briefly to comment. Absolutely in love with Your writing. It flows magically from chapter to chapter. Love the content and the characters. all some of my favourite types of demons. Cant wait to read the rest. Thank You so much. Stuart

Extremely well done! The sex is the icing on the story cake!

Figured this is a good spot of reprieve to comment. This is becoming one of my favorite stories on here, and I'm basically skipping the sex scenes in favor of the story story. Which is like 70% why it's one of my faves.

It seems to me that Lily lost the wager as soon as she flew away after her and Mike's first coupling. The contract was for her to make her body available at all times, and flying away violated that term even if Mike wasn't insisting that she remain.

This took a twist that was unexpected and very satisfying. Thank you. On to the next chapter.

Every Chapter has been great! I have always wondered how authors put little teasers like the doll early on, only to find out it is a huge plot twist later. love your story!

Oh wow, each new chapter is even better! Thanks annabelle!

Sarah is screwed.

Annabelle,

Always remain humble, but never EVER doubt yourself! Your skills easily match those who’ve been #1 on the NYT Best Sellers list numerous times: the Warden, Wright, Mead & more!

You deserve the praise & I hope you have many more stories in the works for the future. Please, don’t ever stop sharing your imagination!

I had saved a chapter here or there to maybe come back and comment on. But this one I can't not write something.

Oh yeah. Loving this series. Part of me is glad I waited. Having such a glut of amazing stories to read is wonderful.

He really is perfect for this place. Even the broken parts of him fitting like a bizarre and tragic lock and key. So wonderful that he has some good women around him to keep him well. Looking forward to more (and luckily, I can just keep going. Right now in fact if I choose.) So lovely.

Thank you for your fantastic work. Be well ^.^

But your writing is the @#! $%&*@ BOMB

Paps

Annabelle, again captivated and the ending comes leaving one sitting on the edge of ones stool reading the screen. Wow.

Just when I think it cannot get better it does. Your writing is fantastic.

This Keeps getting better! I started off at the beginning So looking forward to the next chapter Double thumbs up.

I truly enjoyed this twist on the story, very nice telling.

Loved the wrap up of Lily. Really hot and yet feel good too. I liked the programming/dreamscape. We'll thought out, plus Naia in this all was a wonderful twist and ties in without a bunch of made up loopholes. Excellent.

The amount of thought and level of writing is wonderful.

And the plot thickens.... I really like your imagination on this one. Can't wait to see what you turn up next.

I loved how you portrayed lilly as a succubus, I've got a weak spot for succubus stories where the succubuses don't kill their victims, but having that be a risk and turning the tables on her was just plain epic! And I especially enjoyed Naia's involvement, both in the dreamscape and with the aftermath! I really hope Lilly enjoys her freedom, and that she comes back from time to time for more sexy fun and interesting and mysterious plot developments.

Love love love the story so far! These last two chapters have been amazing!

I like the story , it very good I started to read some of your other storys and came upon this I like it keep it up

I noticed alot of people upset about what happened in the dreamscape with Lily, decrying rape and what not because of the pegging with her tail. Yet it was in the dreamscape, it never actually happened so I don't understand their objections. Plus she is a demon sent to do a job in anyway necessary. But oh well. The trick to bring Naia in was fantastic, and I loved Naia's interactions with Lily. The line where she said she was going to take her for him was pretty badass actually. It would be interesting to see if we ever learn about Lily's past, and I hope she becomes a regular. She officially rounds out my Top 3 favorite characters along with Tink and Cecilia.

I generally love this book anyway, but I also really like Lily! She seems like a nice character with hidden depths, hope she’ll turn up again! Also, altogether, I’ve been reading this for about an hour maybe, and I’m already this far! It’s impossible to put down!

Lots of authors do, and you should profit from your talent. Just outstanding.

Seriously, your story is getting better and better. I'm glad Naia is still getting a lot of attention as she (and Cecilia) are my favourite characters so far. Though I do hope we get to see more of Lily in the future too. She could be very interesting if she helps Mike against the witches. Whatever happens though I'm looking forward to the remaining chapters! Great Work.

Well for starters you are brilliant, with an imagination that is awesome! I have to reach deep for a story line but they seem to roll in like tsunami's from you. Thank you for every chapter in what I feel is one of the finest adventures on this site! Looking forward to every word!!

I just started reading your story 2 or 3 days ago and have already gotten this far. You're a good writer and the story is enjoyable. I like the characters and hope this continues for some time to come.

Thank you for sharing your time and your thoughts with us all.

I have literally been up past 1AM two nights in a row reading your novel in 10 minutes, incredibly captivating, well done! :D

Great story!

Have enjoyed reading so far, and this chapter definitely the best!

Cant wait to read further!

I'm reading this story as fast as I can trying to catch up with the chapters, it is so good, i love it. I can't wait to see how it all turns out, you're a great writer keep it up!

Very nice. Relatable characters and an interesting plot. The sex is well balanced and nicely paced. Thank you

I really liked this one. I was expecting for Mike to make peace with his mother in order to win. But I like this solution more. I'm curious if you planned it ahead when you introduced the soul swap out of it just worked out?

Your storytelling is on Point! Im having troubble getting or wanting to ged t work done.... i started this series and am blown away! Sexy as hell! I think this new succubuss is my favorite chsracter yet... mostly because i love the series LOST GIRL on netflix... but please please please! do not stop.. your making me have multipule orgasim after another... you have a ton of material with this and im excited to see whats next!

The amount of thought, planning and worldbuilding that went into his solution is more than what one would typically expect to find in an erotica story. You are well earning your title of the J.K. Rowling of Monster Erotica.

your writing reminds me of succubus sommoning one of my favorite stories it just stopped I hope this one doesn't do the same thing I wish it would cum faster,one a month is not a nuff but I know and understand why so keep it up I love your writing

I am in love with this series

Superlative storytelling. I'd bet a few bucks that Jenny gets Sarah's body when all is said and done, but we shall see.

I was honestly pegging it to mike making a doppelgänger and using that to win the bet, but your idea was much better, bravo!

I had forgotten the soul part swap. And the result for the Succubus is fair, hopefully she can find a new love. Now to find out what happens to Sarah.

Let us hope it is not fatal.

But she may bring that upon herself.