All Comments on 'Home for Horny Monsters Ch. 011'

I kinda feel sorry for the Witch... she was hot, but evil. But then again, redemption? Perhaps she was just too far gone.

Amazing sex then death? Not a BAD way to go, but still feels a bit sad!

So I have started this again because I can but no matter how many times I read this over it just draws me in. Spoiler, it gets good. I love your work. Many of my friends love it too and keep rereading your work. Keep up the good work.

Omg this made me cry. My heart!

I am Still captivated by this story and the characters Annabelle has created. I do so love how this story has evolved. The imaginative way they interact and adapt to the scenarios her magnificent imagination has portrayed here. Thanks hun for letting this dude read and enjoy a story that I would rate along side the Wheel of time by Robert Jordan.

I should be doing chores, my own writing, anything but you have completely pulled me into this story and it’s absolutely brilliant.

I gotta say Mike really really needs to stop letting people into the house so fucking easily man!!!

I first started reading this for the sex. Now I'm just booked on the story!! I still love the sex though!

Hate sex!! Ode to joy that killed my drive for the day.

Now I can do stuff

That was a perfect end for dealing with Sarah. Nicely done !

I have been stuck to this story now for hours. I can’t put the iPod down.

I wasn’t a fan of the succubus doing what it did to him. But you brought the story back around and made a great finish.

I can’t wait until you bring her back as part of the family.

I have only been on literotica for around a year, but this is the first time I have been glued to a story waiting to see what happens next.

Your a great writer and keep me at the edge of my seat.

Well done

Canadian reader

Fabulous. I have just discovered your series. It took me until now to pause long enough to write this for you. I still have a long way to go and will read them all.

Love your imagination and how well you write. Please do continue this and plenty more stories. I will be coming back for more!

Very good prose, excellent plotting, and SO MUCH. Holy cow you're a champ.

And down goes the spite filled idiot! I actually cheered when she went in.

May I come in? House full of monsters and all kind of shit and dude says sure can. No fucking way he could forget for a second what is that house and no one should be aloud in. Should know not even Beth is allowed back in. Come on

Yes mike should of known better.! But at least Sarah had fun in the end, and it showed mike was thinking of the house and everyone in it.

Hi Annabelle my name is Ifor and I would like to congratulate you on providing us with such a wonderful story. You are a talented writer and storyteller, I have been browsing literotica for years and have found a veritable gold mine of writers here. I will work my way through your works,and wish you all the best in your future endeavours

Best wishes

Awesome story so far. Thanks for writing and posting jt!

Finally fed the goddamn mandragora. That was seriously bothering me so much.

That was awesome. You still haven’t explained the grandfather clock I don’t think.

I totally loved this story...good riddance to the witch...ha ha ha...5 stars

Good thing Mike channeled Emily’s emotions. Well done! Finn

A Beautiful ending!

All i could say wow.This story series is one of the best art i have ever read.

Hi Annabelle,

just wanted to say we (wife and I) love your stories. You should write a book. Love the descriptive writing of the sex scenes. Gets us hot every time we read them.

Regards

Mark and Mandy

Annabelle this is great and l thought of this but could Mike get caught by it ??

After your first story I thought nice a water nimpf, but then the story with tink, I first thought juck. But the more I read it, the more I caught in the story and want to continue reading and reading.... 5 stars every time...

so so so much better. Although i understand a little clearer now of the dreamscape chapter so yes, i apologise for what i said previously.

Im look forward to so much more

Great fantasy!!!

I admit I never saw that coming! Kudos!

Thank you again for your work, good stuff as always

Atleast your erotic and dark execution made me hard as a motherfucker Sarah! I shot out so much cum so fucking hard imagining your erotic body having its final moments gurgling and choking on mandragora fluids. Hope your whore mother Elizabeth is next. I want the author to get real creative with how to end Elizabeth's life. Just make sure the slut is naked and helpless when it happens.

I've binge read this series but needed to pause and comeback to this chapter to leave a message. I don't know if you'll ever ready this but I've long since enjoyed this series for the fantasy and story aspects and the moment when Mike is getting picked up and about to be fed to the mandroga plant he says, "sweet pea", and the plant stops, I had tears in my eyes. This is a wonderfully written series and thank you for putting in the time and effort and sharing with us.

I survived 2 world wars and Salem

Ok but he reacts not proactive!

School by short bus

Well, I for one, hope that Sarah is rescued from the Mandragora and lives to fuck another day.

Evil bitch she may be but she’s a sexy evil bitch and that’s what redemption arcs are for.

Also, I hope your editing gets better. Lots of typos and grammatical errors slipping through.

Great story telling though. I don’t usually make it this far into a series without getting bored.

OK, so I will be redundant yet once again, and tell you how amazing your storytelling skills are! I am good at seeing things coming, but I refused to even try to do that here as I enjoy the way you fuse things together from past experiences or memories and how Mike uses them to his advantage like the use of the word or name “sweet pea“.

The only other thing that I have to say, is that I am sick and tired of seeing people we negative responses and being cowards by doing so anonymously. If you people have something to say that is negative, at least have the balls to do it with your name and not hiding behind the ability of doing so anonymously!!!!!!

I knew he was planning on sacrificing himself, whilst also killing her by activating the plant but what I absolutely DIDN’T know or see coming, was the whole; him saying sweet pea part and the results from it! That ish was straight up literary GENIUS!

I love that after 10 chapters of careful planning and subterfuge, Leeeeroooooy Jeeeeeenkins!

Yes, another great chapter.

That was a great roller coaster ride!! I cant wait to see what happens next!

-KLB

Loved the twist & ending. The society woman need to all be defeated & terminated.

Bill S.

Standard serial ploy, a cliff hanger ending to each chapter, but this is becoming fun.

I'm enjoying this far, far more than I thought. Good pacing, love the mix between humour, action and suspense. Even though we're probably still in the 'setup' phase at chapter 11? Introducing the characters in a sort of monster of the week vibe. And by the look of it I've got a good ways to go with 90+ chapters in the backlog. Let me grab a fresh cuppa, sign up to your Patreon and settle down in my cosy chair with a blanky while spring rains try to drown my windows with their staccato pitter patter :-)

Brilliant keep it up

It's amazing what being nice to your plants will do for your wellbeing as well as theirs! Another well thought out and written chapter. I look forward to reading the next. I appreciate your and your Muse's extraordinary imagination and literary abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

Fucking so erotic how that evil sexy bitch was slowly drowned before getting absorbed.

Can't wait to see more of these nasty foul mouthed cock hardening bitches bite the dust in the future.

Have Mike fuck their pussies and assholes raw before finishing them off in creative ways.

It's what these witches deserve!

Shades of Little Shop of Horrors

I definitely did not see that coming. First I forgot that the mandragora existed, then I wondered how they'd get past the Coat, which I assumed was kind of Invincible somehow.

Fantastic

So excellent! If I could, I'd give it ten stars. Poor boy, damn near fucked to death, then tenderly fed fruit and juice and softly rocked to sleep. Bet he didn't see that coming. And that bitch accidentally cornholing herself is so apropos. I hope eating her doesn't make that poor mandragora sick. Spit her out so Mike can take his revenge fucks out on her! Can't wait to see who you have him nailing next.

New reader here, it is Aug 22, 2023. thank you for the wonderful story.

I think my favorite line so far is I'll keep her alive while you do.

That was actually funny as hell! And her reaction when she realized was priceless!

U probably won’t see this but I love your story

Man, I'm really late to the party but I really like this story.

Just the right amount of scrubby underdog that never feels overpowered, or stupidly lucky.

And he still gets to Bang even the bad girls... Happy to know I still have 100+ chapters to read

Another thing I didn't see coming. But still nice.

That was a great story. The twist was interesting as well.

😻 lovely, just keep pitching these adventures at us. We are hooked, gladly so. More, pretty please.

And have a good day 💓

I just started and i am not really into monster stuff but this is so well written with a fantastic story arc, i just cant stop.

Thanks alot for this epic worrk! Looking forward to read it all 😀

l didn't know it would happen this way, but l did know something would after Mike got to see some of Emily's memories. It was almost like Emily was speaking through Mike. l guess Mike somehow gets back to the house.. 😃😜😜

This is my first read through. Loving it so far. Thanks!!!!

This is a fun story and I love the depth within the characters. You could skip the sex and I would still keep reading. Thank you for sharing this sliver of your soul with us.

I’m rereading this since I lost my place the first time around and you can definitely do it. This story is swell written that you want to keep coming back for more

That's a much better way to deal with a wicked witch than a bucket of soapy water with a touch of lemon added to it.