by writerannabelle
Even on the third or fourth read-through, I still love that battle scene, totally awesome!
i dont reallly post on this website, normaly im here for the quick, but i leget just spent nearly 6 hrs reading up to hear and good god, if you were to tone down the sex you could probably even get this published, its just good fantasy, with some damn good sex
Holy cow, this was AMAZING!!! The battle was INTENSE, the story has been amazing, and I can’t wait to keep reading. I came here to snap one off, and I don’t think I have even once haha! The story is just too good!!!
This is 100% my favorite story on Literotica, though your story about Rae is a close second!
Totally AWESOME! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Excellent battle scene. Edge of the seat stuff!
But really, "stones beat slithers'? Arghh! Definite grins and groans on that one 😂. Having so much fun reading this story. Thank you Annabelle!
Superb, stupendous, fantastically wonderful -- words continue to fail me. As an old sci-fi/fantasy reader (think Ursala K LeGuin, Ray Bradbury, Isaac Asimov, Robert Heinlein, Jules Verne, Edgar Rice Burroughs, etc., this is by far the best writing/plotting of any writing I have seen in quite a while. To use an old European expression, "BRAVO!" (I've been reading these genres for about 70 years -- I love them, and your story here compares favorably with everyone mentioned above
I hope you publish this book I want a hard copy . I will read it over and over.. Thanks for being a great writer
Easily the best in this site! Not just the best story, the best of anything on this site!
Thank goodness I discovered this story 100 plus chapters in. I would go nuts waiting on each new chapter to come out.
Dunno if you still read comments on here but the action sequence was very well done and with a great surprise in it hehe.
That action sequence was pretty good. The deception tactic was pretty impressive.
Better and better and sublime 🌷🪺📽️. @Writerannabelle: This is superentertainment, captivating. I need to go do the dishes, but can't stop reading. Such torment, exquisite ⚛️❣️
Thank you
Without Beth he would of been killed. Lost the house and everything he fights for. So Beth is a big part of the story!! It needs one thing, he has to open the doors and find something that can help him fight before they come back.. but the fight and action was impressive 😉💘