All Comments on 'Home for Horny Monsters Ch. 075'

Fuuuuuuck.. even though those spider girls totally creep me out, I’m still really sad right now. I can’t believe Velvet died! Granted, it makes a whole lot of sense from a storytelling perspective, but I still want to believe that this didn’t need to happen, and if you don’t kill Leeds super hard, I’ll be pretty upset.

Wow, why do I feel so emotionally attached to a half spider woman, and feel a sense of deep loss. Well written. Thanks x

Had no idea how attached I was to these characters until this chapter-75. I'm sitting in a restaurant crying my eyes out. You Annabelle are a TRUE talent. You did a difficult thing. Something every author does with much trepidation, much less a million words in, with an audience maybe unaccustomed to sadness or loss in these stories. Bless you!

Love ❤️

I’m gutted that you killed Velvet but am hopeful that Dana had removed the glove compartment and the egg is safe. I wonder if the magic mace hates Leeds.

Your effort certainly did pay off. I've been tempted to congratulate you at each chapter's end; this time I couldn't resist even tho this was written a couple of years ago and you'll likely never see it. Others may. Thank you, thank you, thank you.

I'm bawling and I hate you and I love this and auuuuugh

This is Literotica, so I feel many are upset this story isn't sex sex sex sex all the time. I personally have been reading this and mostly skipping the sex scenes. They're rather repetitive after a while and in some cases don't progress the story along. That being said I absolutely love you're world building. Seeing new characters is the point of this story I feel like. To be upset there's too many is sad. The absolute extremes is a little ehhhh. The apocalypse is a terrible event as is. Why make it more unbelievable with an Egyptian priestess at this exact moment? We knew she was in there, could've been whenever. Just feels like you're trying to pack as much as possible in to each chapter/book. Also, I hated velvet. I was hoping she died. For Mike to suddenly favor one monster over his whole house? That really went against the grain of everything you've written up till that point. Other wise, I love it. Any story written this long on this website fades out with the sex. I feel like the comments are hear to get off and not read lol

This story has gone out of control , far too much happening now and too many characters all doing things at once has lost me , i will see out the chapter but then i think i may be out

Like you get this is supposed to be a harem story right? The time between sex keeps getting longer and now we have a death?

I just have to say that even though I knew it was coming, I still bawled like a baby. Thank you Annabelle for being such an amazing writer, you really make us feel invested as readers.

Nobody is ever truly gone, made me cry

That was a heart wrenching chapter. I never expected a death and because of that I felt sadness that I wasn't ready for. It was a hard read, wow.

In some ways this is the best chapter in the story so far. Up to this point it seemed like no matter how bad things got every one will be alright. Now the story has more gravitas. That being said, I hate that Velvet is gone. Thank you for your writing.

Nice ending to this chapter because now there are 2 very pissed off people at Leeds and he is in for a world of hurt

I came here to jack it, not to cry

How dare you

"they spilled from his lips as easily as secrets that no longer mattered."

Just....perfect.

It’s sad to see a monster go, especially after reading through your side series on the Arachne. In a sense, the death was beautiful and proof positive that this is the lit in literotica. There is really great writing on this site (see Angels of Bataan in Loving Wives, Athena’s Dance in Incest/Taboo, The Wingman in First Time, or Only Yours in Romance).

I appreciate that there are stakes in this novel. Tongue in cheek, the “fuck and luck” strategy can work, but it has to fail at times. Wow. Kudos.

Wish 6 stars were an option!

Kudos

Captain Kirk: "LEEEEDS!!!!"

I... I can't remember the last time I read something that moved my emotions around so much. I cried a little (when a scene made me recall a deep, dark sentiment (tied to despair and hopelessness) that has slumbered for months, or years, stirred briefly. I read Abella's raging heartfire and denial a second time so I could channel it.

*clap* Bra. *clap* Fucking. *clap* Va. Brava! --Z.N.

2nd time reading through this book and it still makes my eyes well up and have the sads.

😥😥 Leeds must die!!! 😡

Wow…just, wow. Incredible.

-AT

What a tearjerker! The emptiness in my core (from my wife's passing) is still a gaping sore. Your way with words about Velvet's pssing brought tears to my eyes in sympathy for both Mike and Abella. I imagine the same will be true as Eualalie grieves. I'm incredibly touched and awed with your sensitivity and skill.

The scenes with velvet and abella in these last two chapters have given me chills. Incredible.

God-damn-it, I'm not meant to cry over porn literature . . . but I did.

At the end of the previous chapter I was extremely worried for both Abella and Velvet, so it was with some worry that I started reading this chapter. I think it is an obvious mark of your talent as a writer that I'm completely invested in each and every one of the characters.

Damn, Annabelle. You're breaking my heart here. I liked the kid.

However, as one of my favorite anime protagonists says, "Whether it is providence, fate, or miracle, before my eyes, it simply prostrates and vanishes." Anos Voldigoad, The Misfit of Demon King Academy

Sasha Necron “What would you do if your fate was already sealed ?”

Anos Voldigoad “I wouldn’t stress about it if it wasn’t a big deal, but if I did not like it, I’d change it.”

Sasha Necron ”You think you can change fate?”

Anos Voldigoad “Sure, it’s simple

All I’d have to do is destroy it”

That was sad but fits the story.

Is the missing egg an Easter Egg or just MIA?

😢

😢

Wow....

I cried....

Thank you.

Thank you for another mammorable chapter. It's sad but I'm sure you did the right thing in behalf of these epic fantasy and sex series.

Superb! I cried.

Nooooooo! Why she was my favorite! Very powerful and well done!

Well. Fuck. 🥹😢

Lose of life, willing to let those pass on, and a promise to raise the children of the future. This along with a solemn vow to avenge close friends. So many emotions to unpack in this chapter.

Killing a character is hard decision. You just want the heroes to prevail and be happy but have a story with real consequences and growth. Well done threading the needle.

That was the new hardest thing to read. Holy crap that sucked and was so powerful. Leeds is so fucked. He better run far and fast. An angry Bigfoot, Fire breathing gargoyle and magic bomb are out for his head now.

As I mentioned before, I’m a new reader to Literotica and have been wrapped up in your tale for the last 2 weeks. Today really hit me as I just lost one of my dogs. Well done. Well done.

Why do you think you always have to out do yourself and go bigger and bigger? That must business was way too much..... Completely taking me out of the story! Well conceived is that matters..... Satisfying is that matters. This sucks the life out of it! Spectacle like The third act of CGI madness that ruins otherwise good blockbuster movies.

I cried... Your story made Made cry. Good job 😢

WOW You killed her, that really sucks, HUGE. You still got 5 stars, it was a great chapter, but ..... let me cry over here

OMG I cried so hard. I am just praying Dana saved the egg and it is still alive.

I hope what Dana was trying to tell Mike is what I think she was trying to tell Mike.

And thanks for confirming Velvet’s death before that last scene with Abella. It would have been even more heart-wrenching if that scene had been when her fate was confirmed.

The relationship of Abella and Velvet seems much deeper and more developed than Velvet and Mike. That just seemed to come from no where and for no reason. End result would have been the same without the Velvet and Mike love story. Fridging Velvet was going to motivate Mike towards revenge even if their relationship was only as deep as the one he has with Quetzallia for instance.

Book five is my least favorite so far.

Love doesn't happen in a week. That is Lust and Obsession.

I'm verklempt now. 5/5 because I can't give you 10/10.

Well, damn... that made me cry. Stupendous chapter. Heart wrenching. ❤️

Even knowing exactly what was going to happen on this, my second read through, the content and quality of writing in this chapter is enough to bring a man to tears.

Regrettably, I've got just the right musical theme for this chapter: Evanescence, "My Immortal"

All throughout this story arc, there were not-too-subtle clues that somebody may not be long for this world.

As one of the latest additions, and with a few pointed hints, I was afraid it would be Velvet.

I cannot over emphasize the anxiety this caused, her being a favorite of mine ever since her introduction in D&H. Like a lot of other readers, it's hard to put into words how and why we came to be so attached to a fictional half-spider character, but it could probably be summed up in her humanity. From her parents of Darren and Ana(who I'll never give up hope on reading more of) to her family's hobbies and activities, there's a lot to relate to.

Worry over her fate was further heightened by the descriptions of her potential daughter: visions of what might be, mating, and an emotional roller coaster of actions regarding the eggs that kept the readers engaged with concern for Velvet and her child.

Some readers may disagree, but I really appreciate the inclusion of kids into this story. It's a significant part of the protagonist growing and maturing as a man, and in the context of the story, as Caretaker.

I must say, I particularly like how the conflict was fleshed out with Abella, and I was not disappointed by the reconciliation and redemption that developed, even though a part of me wishes it ended differently.

As to the final farewell itself, I can't think of any way it could have been better, with Velvet's last actions to save her child, and then her new friend.

On top of that, Abella and Mike both get a touching farewell.

"No man left behind" indeed

That was too much, Velvet being killed. So moving. But is the egg safe, if so, it has to be Dana.

If you do not cry you are not in the story.

Who cries over the death of a spider! I DID.

Dam just dam. I started off being afraid of her but I never hated her. Life is so cruel but at the same time filled with joy. I am overcome by the sense that I have lost someone close to me. Such a beautiful young life snatched away. And for what? For some assholes power grab. I guess the monster world and the human world aren't that different. I am in tears as I type this. And I think it's fate that it has started to rain at the exact moment I read the last part of this chapter. My tears are for the spider who lived and who's children should have been able to live. Rest in peace velvet. We love you.

First let me say you are an amazing writer with beautiful mind. You created a world that I have immersed my self in and I love you for it. You are also a cruel sadist. You spend chapter after chapter of light hearted stuff, then bam, emotional nut punch. The fact you can do that shows your talent.

Sad ending to this chapter. You are an amazing author. Nobody's work has captivated me like this since Anne Mccaffrey. I have been binge reading your story for the past two days. Please don't ever stop.

Tfw you come to put for a quick fap, and 75 chapters and a compelling story later, you're getting hit right in the feels 😥

I thought it was going to be Abella. Well, I think I knew in a way, or maybe, I don't know, I wasn't sure where Velvet was going to end up. I am so sad, mad, and angry. Never had I connected so fast to any of the other characters, and I was ecstatic for the tree nymph, but Velvet topped and exceeded that.

But why?? She was going to be a mom... Like, I get it, life sucks, but Velvet had so much potential left. Im not sure why, but man, I wanted more. I wanted to learn more about her and see how she faced and handled challenges and whatever came next.

Man, I am not sure why I connected to her so fast. Like, I barely new her, but she had this courage and strength to her to that was just so attractive. The way she held onto Mike when he was poisoned.....

I've pretty much powered through this series. It was not something I expected to keep reading and it was to the point I didn't even realize the lack of sex between chapters. I did not initially think that the spiders were going to be as cool as they were. Like, I like spiders, so I was excited to see what you did with that, but figured after a chapter or two, they would just be the Cabin in the Woods crew. Like Teen Titans East.

But, to have 2, and make them sisters, and to quickly make them so integral to the story... I mean, I was so excited to read more. I mean, I usually am, but as the story as a whole, not necessarily about one specific character, but Velvet was different, I was actually specifically excited about her. The only other character I feel this strongly about is Lily. Not going to lie, I be crushing hard on Beth, but I fell hard for Velvet. Im just going to have to take a break so I can process this, so I can accept it and move on. I'm heartbroken. Like, man, this series had been so fun to read. I want to be so angry at you Anabelle. I guess take that as a compliment at how great your writing is and it caused someone, to create an account on this site and become emotionally invested in something they had no intention reading more than the very first chapter.

Sorry, I ramble and hopefully in a week or two I can comeback to see how Mike gives the devil what he deserves, but for now, I'm going to have to come to terms that Velvet won't be there. :(

😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

Ugh first Mordin Solis then Legion then Thane now Velvet?!

Ugh!!

Yeah sorry I’ve been playing Mass Effect recently and now I’m catching up here.

You writers are breaking my heart.

I guess that’s a sign of a good writer when they suck you into a story so deep that you feel broken hearted when a loved character dies.

When the cabin was telling mike that someone would be pruning his branches to make him a spear, I knew something like this was going to happen. I hope he doesn’t lose himself. Mike has very much always looked for the third option of how to solve problems/disputes. And he still had that when he was talking about regretting not negotiating with the Nirumbi when they first attacked. I hope he keeps that but can recognize that sometimes you can’t.

Very much puts me in mind of the Doctor, specifically with the Eleventh Doctor and the whole “when a good man goes to war”. Can’t wait to see what he does to Leeds

I had a feeling Velvet might not make it. I hate it but understand why both storywise and character wise. Your storytelling is so damn good it made this chapter hurt so damn much. I want to give this chapter 6 stars somehow. Very vivid. The last scene I can picture in my head exactly how it would be shot as a show/movie.

Me too, K_Fletcher. Me too.

I cried.

Velvet's end struck me hard, so hard that I almost wasn't able to hold back my tears...

At least I know that Mike's vengeance will stronger than the Universe's hardest material, and I can't wait to read what he'll do to Leeds for killing his beloved Arachne.

Sigh i hate to say this but your story telling is grand both in good ways and emotional

I knew Velvet would pass away somehow back when she had visions of her daughter in the library her hands were ethereal which meant she wasa ghost of some kind and Dana found the egg while working on the Jeep (haven't read past this yet but these are all foreshadows i saw as i read)

Velvets ending scenes brought tears to my eyes even though i saw it coming because your writing is so good

Can't wait to finish book 5 and almost be caught up while on the other hand i know it will be hard to know i can't keep binging it

Stay safe out there Annabelle

You have us invested in your characters so it was hard reading Velvets demise, my question is will her sister avenge her with the mace? And how to deal with that Egyptian bitch? And will Mike's magic fuck the life back into Dana? getting close to catching up with your story.

I really appreciate how you brought Abella back in a big way the last few chapters, she's such a rockstar character

This absolutely broke my heart to read. It feels so unfair. And i can only hope by some thin thread that velvet’s child might live with abella as a mother figure.

wow

am i ever cut up.

a loss, yet somehow it was expected but i really liked Velvet, a lot

Nooo fuzzy is my favorite character..... You can sure pull heart strings fabulous tail thank you so much for sharing with all of us.

Oh

Love hurts, and this chapter hurts so much.

This was the most beautiful death scene I have ever experienced. Better than endgame or any movie I can recall rn. I really really loved Velvet and, as was intended, I saw it coming for a while but still it got me really bad. Annabelle, you have outdone yourself. These stories teach me something I will never forget.

Somehow hoping the egg from the Jeep somehow survived

Poor girl got crushed saving Abella. Went out like a true hero.

I knew Velvet wouldn't be in the story for too long. I just had a feeling. Girls like Beth, Cecilia and Tink etc were always meant to stay by Mike's side for the long run. They are like long time family members that are always there for him whereas Velvet was meant to be like a guest that everyone loves to have over but ends up having to leave soon. Reminds me of Aerith from final fantasy...........

This was hard to finish reading but I take comfort in the fact that she's back together with her loving mother and father now.

No wordss.... I ,....

How dare you make me cry Annabelle. That hurt me deep. Enjoying it but man that ending hurt me.

Damn

Velvet was and is a bad ass character.

Bravo on a tough write and bravo on so much raw emotion into the series.

Thank you. 😭

Lol true man.

It's like they've never read stories where major or lovable characters die or get killed even once in their lives. They just have to announce like they are some kind of important person on this website that they are no longer interested in reading the rest of the story to make Annabelle feel bad. Like bitch, if you leave, literally no one gives a fuck. And don't let the door hit your candy asses on the way out.

Annabelle is hands down one of the best authors on this site, you're just jealous of her growing popularity among older and newer visitors.

Look at all these self centered assholes saying that they are going to stop reading the story. The world does not revolve around you selfish fuckers, you do know that right? If you wanna be a whiny little bitch instead of crossing the finish line and make excuses to bail on Annabelle's story then good for you.

Nothing but fake ass fans going "BOO HOO, i don't like it" ain't gonna make Annabelle lose sleep over them.

Thank you the stories brought me through a pandemic the loss of a job and start of the new one. Through all of these challenges, I always had your stories.You are a master storyteller and I so like reading what you write

This was the first time in a long while that a story actually had me about to cry. Although we only knew Velvet from a few chapters of D&H and the last 12 chapters, it felt as heartbreaking as if Tink, Abella or Zel would have died. I really loved the arachne story. I think Velvet was just as haunted by the past (mostly her dad passing away), than Darren was with his brother. So like father, like daughter, I suppose.

I started out thinking of Leeds as just some rando who controlls a couple of smaller armies, like the shadow, but much less mysterious and built up. But after him causing Velvet's death, he now be my most despised foe and I really hope Mike makes good on his promise to kill the devil. Not like with the fairy queen or Yuki, where they could be reasoned with, but really making Leeds pay.

BTW, just noticed the parallel between Beth having to deal with an angel and Mike with the devil. I'm not sure where this parallel goes as of yet, but hoping for some interessting stuff in that regard, maybe in the final chapter of book 5.

Now I'm really pumped to see the finale and the inevitalbe demise of the Devil of Jersey. -- 5* as always.

<sniffles> You made me tear up and yes I'm a little mad at you. It's also a story and writing that had to suck a lot so I feel for you more than I'm mad. I don't like what happened but it was very well done and thus one of only a couple 5s I've ever given out. As always, thanks for sharing. Weird... Velvet... A character in a story that wasn't even around very long and I feel like I lost a friend.

Now I have tears in my eyes. Damn these onion cutting ninjas.

I do hope the spider egg is found safe. I love your stories.

Thank you for the last year and a half that I have been reading your story I look forward to reading the rest of Mikes adventures

Your story keeps evolving & getting more deep & meaningful...It is way beyond so many of the shallow stories here! It should be published in print...would be a great series to have & treasure. Thank you for putting in the incredibly creative work to make this. <3

I'm with Mike. Kill that Devil.

Damn. Nobody does it like you. The highs, the lows. The thrills, the sorrows. The victories, the defeats. The imagination! The core values you weave throughout. I have read everything authored by you on Literotica. I have read HFHM beginning to end three times now, waiting for next chapters. You have me in your clutches. I am at your mercy.

Well... Fuck. That was beautiful and heartwrenching.

Damn.

My heart. You beautiful wretched author. Oh my poor heart

Still killing it, no pun intended, lol! Thank you for continuing to write phenomenal chapters. I eagerly await the next installment!

Damn you for ripping my heart out like this. Please, for the love of God, make the fight against Leeds satisfying. This CAN’T just end with “he took a few bad hits but he’ll be back”. We need some Mike going Hulk after this. 5 stars

I am so so excited about what mike is going to do in retaliation and I hope he finds a way to at least see velvet one more time. This is an amazing chapter

I have to say, when I started this chapter I was already planning what I was going to write here. Phrases like I am bored with writing the same praises to an ongoing litenay of chapters that excite and thrill.

In truth after reading that I can honestly say that I have never before reading any book cried for any character.

Very good story telling...it was unfortunate that Velvet had to die, but now it will make it so much better when they find her egg is still intact...hopefully. I enjoy your writing oh so much...5 stars!!

When you have a new favorite character... aaaand it's gone. I hope Mike goes nuclear next chapter. This is the first time he's screwed up so badly, he should get some much-needed character growth out of it.

One of the best chapters yet.

I have been reading your series almost from the beginning. I have loved each one but this is the first time I have felt compelled to comment. This was brilliant. I did not expect the feelings I had when Velvet passed but it just shows your skill to have made me care so much for not only Mike but also Velvet. This is one of the few series on this site that when a new chapter drops I get excited and is undoubtedly my favourite. Thank you. You are amazing and I can't wait to read as many stories in this series as you write.