All Comments on 'Home for the Holidays'

by LittleFallOfRain

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AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 4 years ago
Daddy's girl

So many desire, so many afraid. Children need to do more seducing as parents are afraid of their desires. My mother's only regret was waiting after she knew I wanted her.

livetoreadlivetoreadover 4 years ago

A sad attempt at story telling. Straight up fucking. No passion, no love, not even a "hi sweetheart, I haven't seen you in months, you catch me wanking so I guess we should fuck before I say hello." One star ... Less if I could give it but I guess the author has somehow disabled voting below four stars... No wonder the number is so high.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Not Great but Just Ok

Does not seem at all real whatsoever. Just straight sex, become very boring and obvious. A good try but please make the stories believable

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

💥💥💥💥💥 (five stars)!

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