All Comments on 'Home for the Holidays Ch. 08-10'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I LOVED this chapter! They are going to get married, and have babies. Excellent story line. I hope they don’t encounter too much turbulence with his family.

nestorb30nestorb30almost 3 years ago

Not sure why, but I found this chapter a bit annoying. Good story but a little irritating

DCCoffeemanDCCoffeemanalmost 3 years ago

Another nice addition to this story. Hopefully no bad surprises with Nicky’s family…

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Not sure how this is the end of the story? Haven’t met his parents, the red herrings about her Sister and her Father’s health etc, there’s unfinished business here @Daniellekitten…. Otherwise good story and thanks for writing!

dirtyoldbimandirtyoldbiman12 months ago

excellent story so far. vivid characters, dialogue. My guess is they end up taking over the farm

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Hey: I'm sorry about chapter two of Captive Angel being posted before chapter one. There was a paragraph or two that needed editing and I turned it back in to those who run this place. It should be out soon. Also. If there are any of my books you would like reported just tell...