All Comments on 'Home for the Taking'

..no characterisation and silly dialogue

Yeeeeeeeessssssssss this is so very uninteresting EEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!

Sue your Incredible you might want to check your spelling zipper is spelled with a z not a sok but serious your an incredible woman so keep up the writing and the story with more Nora&Lynn.

Pat Murray

I couldn't make it through the entire story. The dialogue was silly and the spelling and bad puncuation irked me to no end.

a guy. Sorry dont believe this was written by a woman. Ignorant plot and dialogue--like something a male fantasizes about.

What a fantastic lesbian fuck.

love the story of home for the taking.

Only wanted to read more. pity it was not longer. but none the less it was excellent reading.

boring

Outstanding, really hot and nasty. Ready for the next chapter to see what happens next.

I think the two of you are going to enjoy your job even more when you get to fuck more employee's or fire them..!!

Wow! This is soooo wonderfully raunchy!

Thanks again

Love

Ginaxxxxxxxxx

Dumb.