All Comments on 'Home in the Hills Pt. 01'

You've got my attention. I like it a lot. Please continue. I can hardly wait!

Valory, I like the structure of this thread....the back and forth "diary entries"...the increasingly arousing/erotic developments. Wishing you'd continue with their interactions....this storytelling!!!

SissyCrissy6245..............xoxoxo

As I've only skimmed through for now, i'll be brief. I know i shouldn't have to but I appreciate good grammar and spelling for a start - often missing in some offerings. I liked the non-standard structure (diaries) and the fairly realistic setting. So I'm looking forward to future episodes :)

Like the style, the tempo and the slow, teasing exposition. Can't wait until the next chapter Valory, luv. No wonder you are one of my favorite authors.

xoxo,

Di

Thanks for the nice comments. It was refreshing to write from two different perspectives. I just submitted part II, a small portion of which may explain where the story title came from .....