All Comments on 'Home Run Ch. 01'

Thanks so much for reading all the way to the end! This is my first time publishing in the gay male category so I wasn’t sure just how well a longer slow burn would do.

Really enjoyed the story. Looking forward to more. Thank you.

This was really nicely done, the build up works really well, and feels natural not forced. Actually I relate Yuma's reelings for a close yet distant friend right now. Looking forward to seeing what happens next.

This is really well done, I love the build up which makes the intimacy between the characters so much more intense. Actually I can really relate with Yuma's feeling for a close (yet in a way distant) friend as I'm in a similar situation right now, your characterisation is so meaningful. I look forward to seeing what happens next!

@remy247 I'm so glad you liked it. I've got plans for at least three installments of Home Run so there will definitely be more!

Please please please update asap, I loved the first chapter ❤