All Comments on 'Home Schooling'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Thank You ...

... for your time and imagination on this story! 5* Great composition, diction, and style; and not so guttural (as others on this site), but just the right amount of passion and physicality. Great Fantasy! ...19-c

SchakaSchakaover 4 years ago
Love it!!

Nice pace building to a great climax!

5*

TSreaderTSreaderover 4 years ago
A very yummy story

Very yummy indeed, one I'd like to see continue. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Fabulous

Very hot. Thank you for a realistic story. I could read more chapters. Would love to read about him having her ass.

DomJ69DomJ69over 4 years ago
HOT!

Thank you, I enjoyed your story very much. A good story has a setup, transition, and a payoff. Your setup and payoff scenes were very good, but I would have liked more in the transition section. It happened too quickly for me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Oh Yes

It lead to a great finish the story and myself. Will definitely read this one again. More than once!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

I hope you will write another part to this story.

likestolicklikestolickover 4 years ago
Hot

Mom needs more lessons.

cragsy1969cragsy1969over 4 years ago
More

Would love to see if she also got pregnant as he had come in her and if they move away to make family life together away from those knowing they are mother and son.

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57over 4 years ago

Very hot!! A second chapter please!

goducks111goducks111over 4 years ago
great story

5 stars. very clever - i wish i could go back for some "lessons"! your stories are always fun and sexy to read.

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyover 4 years ago
Lovely

One of the rare stories where you are taken on the journey with the characters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
amazing and beautiful

If this story doesn't deserve 5*s then I don't know what does. Good work. Keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
hot story

erotic story with an unexpected twist

Funewriter1Funewriter1over 4 years ago

An excellent beginning to what could be a great multi-chaptered story. I hope you continue this one.

Lrdpiza3Lrdpiza3over 4 years ago
More?

Pleas let there b more to the story

MargaretSexyMumMargaretSexyMumover 4 years ago
Fantastic

Such a romantic and sensual story of the love between a mother and her son. So beautiful.

MistressMissy08MistressMissy08over 4 years ago
Beautiful

I very much enjoyed your story of love and compassion.great job. Thank you for sharing your time.

DaddywantsmilkDaddywantsmilkover 4 years ago
More please

I loved the story and I there's more. I hope he gets her pregnant and maybe they could bring girl his age into the relationship (maybe a cousin, her neice).

homerjayhomerjayover 4 years ago
5 stars

another great one. a story where i can picture everything is perfect. thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Misuse of word "masturbate"

You can't masturbate someone. Masturbation means self pleasure, you can only do it to yourself. Please stop misusing the word.

blackknight314blackknight314over 4 years ago
Pretty good...

... I loved the build up. She needed training on her deep throating skills and her anal skills. How deep can he go? Oh well, it appears that the story is over and I'll have to make my own ending.

linnearlinnearover 4 years ago
Beautiful

That turned out to be a wonderful story, very beautiful but also very sensual. Great writing.

oldpantythiefoldpantythiefover 4 years ago
Teacher's pet

Hoping they go on to graduate classes, lol.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
I like a little more vocalization

"Oh mom, I can't believe how good your pussy feels," Flynn groaned. "Flynn, you fuck me so good, harder baby," Tess moaned. "Oh honey, oh honey, fuck me baby, make me cum," Tess exclaimed. "I'm going to cum mom, I'm going to shoot my sperm deep in your pussy," Flynn cried out.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

The perfect amount, not too over the top.

Badboy1757Badboy1757about 2 years ago

Really liked it, like the previous post commented...Just right amount

GeorgeGaleGeorgeGaleabout 2 years ago

Great story, very well written and told..........():\

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Love it

Im into inscest any group here

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