by sunburycd
... for your time and imagination on this story! 5* Great composition, diction, and style; and not so guttural (as others on this site), but just the right amount of passion and physicality. Great Fantasy! ...19-c
Very yummy indeed, one I'd like to see continue. Thank you!
Very hot. Thank you for a realistic story. I could read more chapters. Would love to read about him having her ass.
Thank you, I enjoyed your story very much. A good story has a setup, transition, and a payoff. Your setup and payoff scenes were very good, but I would have liked more in the transition section. It happened too quickly for me.
It lead to a great finish the story and myself. Will definitely read this one again. More than once!
Would love to see if she also got pregnant as he had come in her and if they move away to make family life together away from those knowing they are mother and son.
5 stars. very clever - i wish i could go back for some "lessons"! your stories are always fun and sexy to read.
One of the rare stories where you are taken on the journey with the characters.
If this story doesn't deserve 5*s then I don't know what does. Good work. Keep it up.
An excellent beginning to what could be a great multi-chaptered story. I hope you continue this one.
Such a romantic and sensual story of the love between a mother and her son. So beautiful.
I very much enjoyed your story of love and compassion.great job. Thank you for sharing your time.
I loved the story and I there's more. I hope he gets her pregnant and maybe they could bring girl his age into the relationship (maybe a cousin, her neice).
another great one. a story where i can picture everything is perfect. thanks.
You can't masturbate someone. Masturbation means self pleasure, you can only do it to yourself. Please stop misusing the word.
... I loved the build up. She needed training on her deep throating skills and her anal skills. How deep can he go? Oh well, it appears that the story is over and I'll have to make my own ending.
That turned out to be a wonderful story, very beautiful but also very sensual. Great writing.
"Oh mom, I can't believe how good your pussy feels," Flynn groaned. "Flynn, you fuck me so good, harder baby," Tess moaned. "Oh honey, oh honey, fuck me baby, make me cum," Tess exclaimed. "I'm going to cum mom, I'm going to shoot my sperm deep in your pussy," Flynn cried out.