by CaffeineFetish
Thank you CaffeineFetish. I am enjoying this very much. It has a depth missing from most Literotica stories. I look forward to seeing how you bring the various threads of the plot together.
I usually thank this author for fine plot, character development, etc., and then excoriate him for sloppy writing and deficient copy editing. This time it's praise only—well written and well edited.
Thanks
This really is a great series. I was surprised that Diana retired, but more surprised that none of the council didn’t ask her to reconsider.
Not a cliff hanger but you have set up the story so that we all want more.
Thank you
I hope this isn't the end of the story! Been awhile since the last chapter.
Fantastic chapter, it’s always rewarding when the bad guys get pulled down.
Thanks for sharing
Tess (uk)
wow. great flow and story line lead and connection between each chapter. nicely done.
worried about DK as 3 years isn't enough unless he "gets into a prison fight."