All Comments on 'Home Sweet Home Ch. 09'

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mithanialmithanialabout 3 years ago

In the end... its always about the car. Steven King.. Christine.

Boyd PercyBoyd Percyabout 3 years ago

Another great chapter!

5

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Excellent story. But then all your stories are very enjoyable reads.

GHreaderGHreaderabout 3 years ago
Lots of plot. Lots of character development. Good flow. A great read.

Thank you CaffeineFetish. I am enjoying this very much. It has a depth missing from most Literotica stories. I look forward to seeing how you bring the various threads of the plot together.

Sunset154Sunset154about 3 years ago

Great chapter, can not wait for the next one. 5 stars

Lector77Lector77about 3 years ago

I usually thank this author for fine plot, character development, etc., and then excoriate him for sloppy writing and deficient copy editing. This time it's praise only—well written and well edited.

Thanks

msilsbymsilsbyabout 3 years ago

Most agreeable.

Most. Agreeable.

WhoGivesAShitWhoGivesAShitabout 3 years ago

This really is a great series. I was surprised that Diana retired, but more surprised that none of the council didn’t ask her to reconsider.

AnnaValley11AnnaValley11about 3 years ago

Not a cliff hanger but you have set up the story so that we all want more.

Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I hope this isn't the end of the story! Been awhile since the last chapter.

pumpop201pumpop201about 3 years ago
Simply wonderful.

I can't wait for your next submission.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Fantastic chapter, it’s always rewarding when the bad guys get pulled down.

Thanks for sharing

Tess (uk)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

wow. great flow and story line lead and connection between each chapter. nicely done.

dirtyoldbimandirtyoldbimanabout 1 year ago

worried about DK as 3 years isn't enough unless he "gets into a prison fight."

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