All Comments on 'Home Sweet Home Ch. 10'

Excellent ending!

5

Wasn't a bad ending - just felt like it was rushed so the author could end the story.

Thank you for this very enjoyable story. Sad that it ended as I fell in love with the characters. Really appreciate your work.

Good storytelling, so thanks for the effort. Not your best, but still good.

And—an honest reader owes a fine author truth—the absence of copy editing

made it a less enjoyable experience than it might have been.

Great story. Thanks for writing it.

Ok ending I want the show and the world you created... the story within the story. Ummm.. are younwriting that?

I liked the story. The ending made sense, it fit with the preceding chapters, but this finale felt rushed. Less dialogue, more statements of fact, less emotion. It needed the emotion and detail of the other chapters. It’s a good ending, just not enough of it.

One of my favourite stories - a neat but quick ending. Love conquers everything

Really good. I enjoy all your work. Thanks

Nice epilogue....I felt the story ended well in the last chapter, but this worked- like the epilogue in the Harry Potter series.

The only mar in the whole story were some scattered errors, typos you didn’t catch ( i.e. alluded instead of eluded). No big deal- I caught where I had used the same sentence to start consecutive paragraphs in an article I wrote only after it was in print- and I was the editor of that issue!

I am SO stoked to see you are writing the order of the shattered cross!! THANK YOU! I'm looking forward to it now! :)

Damn man, I'm not supposed to tear up like this!

Amazing story. Thanks for this and all the others. Looking forward to more when you have the time. I'll be checking back until I find a new one!

Awesome, loved it. Thank you!

A great story, well written, well paced, great character evolution and only a few errors here and there. I dont know if you have done already but a spin off of Little Howie and his moms story would be nice. Also gotta say if you haven't already started on the order of the shattered cross I really hope you do write it. It sounds like it has great promise and something I would like to read. Thank you for keeping me entertained.

Quit your day job and just write.

Terrific story line, great characters, superb development! ***** You make drool to learn and understand more about your protagonists. thank you for a truly great read.

Another absolutely awesome story. I looking forward to more of your stuff!

Gorgeous sweet story. Love the plot twists, intrigue and multiple HEAs - thanks for a great read.

Most admiring of your story telling ability! Thank you!

Just phenomenal, your ability to weave personalities, places and plot is just brilliant, your crime writing implies a deeper understanding of the Police Service than an average joe, possibly first hand, if so, thank you for however you’ve served, if not please pass that along to your info source.

Thank you also for continuing to contribute here on Lit, your words and stories are much appreciated, best wishes, Ppfzz.

I feel I'm the only person who saw the connection to Chase kramner and his PI company in this book.

Beautiful work

Exceptional writing. 5*

Just a few corrections:

alluded should be eluded

ensured should be insured

she'd had to leave should be she'd have to leave

pressing her lips to smoother her reaction should be pressing her lips to smother her reaction

negations should be negotiations

and a had Alice should be and had Alice

Just re-read it cause you started on the novel from this series. Loved it just as much as the first time. Also I would love a spin-off that I think was alluded to. Jo becoming a private eye. I understand it was a way of concluding her part with a happy note but also has potential.

Thanks for a great story with a fantastic ending, always loved happy endings. Scumbags got what they deserve and the good guys can now ride off into the sunset.

Nicely done, great story. I am surprised at how few comments you have gotten,

I am just now commenting, because I couldn't take the time to.Had to keep reading...

Don't comment often,but have just spent the best part of my vacation binge reading your entire offering.General impression, funnily enough,is I'm impressed.Excellent stories with fully developed characters that entwine between the different stories seamlessly.Only bugbear that seems consistent across the board is the average four to five spelling,punctuation and wrong word mistakes per page {At one point per sentence}.Anyhoo thanks for keeping me entertained during the cyclone (Southern hemisphere),rain ,flooding and landslides that did their best to keep me cabin bound.

I waited till I was done to comment, mostly because I didn't want to stop between chapters. This was really good!! Now going to devour every other story you have written. LOL!!

Brilliant storyline.. loved it .. thanks

I LOVE that these stories are all interconnected, and that the main characters are people I can admire. Thank you for your wonderful work.

Well done! Really enjoyed this