by patnutt
Very well written without psycho babble. This could go a few chapters easily with what you started with.
the title said ch1. its a start but only 1 ch
I Liked it looking forward 2 more
Whats wrong,, not enough to stroke to when mommy read the story to you
Thanks for the upvotes. Working on Ch 2 now. If you have any suggestions feel free to pm me. I can't guarantee that I will take all suggestions, but I will at least consider them.
Seriously even though you put together anentire Romance in one page I'm glad you serialized it and am looking forward to reading more in a few minutes