All Comments on 'Home-Town Hero Ch. 01'

by patnutt

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Excellent Start, When Is The Next Chapter??

Very well written without psycho babble. This could go a few chapters easily with what you started with.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
re: total rubbish

the title said ch1. its a start but only 1 ch

I Liked it looking forward 2 more

chytownchytownabout 9 years ago
Good Start****

Looking forward to future chapters, Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
AHHHHHHHHH poor wee Anon RE: total rubish

Whats wrong,, not enough to stroke to when mommy read the story to you

patnuttpatnuttabout 9 years agoAuthor
thanks

Thanks for the upvotes. Working on Ch 2 now. If you have any suggestions feel free to pm me. I can't guarantee that I will take all suggestions, but I will at least consider them.

rightbankrightbankabout 9 years ago
Great start

and they have the whole weekend ahead of them.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
An entire Romance in one page! Wow!

Seriously even though you put together anentire Romance in one page I'm glad you serialized it and am looking forward to reading more in a few minutes

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