All Comments on 'Home Video in Black and White'

by steelring

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LenardSpencerLenardSpencerover 1 year ago

I liked the story, with its big twist. However, you didn't really indicate if the version uploaded showed Sarah's face. Although the comments it received mentioned about the wife watching her husband fuck the other woman. That all seems very strange considering their need to remain anonymous. Now her face is recognisable? With several hundred thousand views? That doesn't make sense unless they were planning to go into porn and didn't care who recognised them.

Also, you had previously described Sam as being "generously endowed", obviously to mislead the readers. Yes, it would have been a huge shock to Sarah once she realised that Sam was a woman and a sweet cunt was placed on her face. Wow! However, once Sarah had accepted that and was getting in to the whole "woman" thing, how extra shocking would it have been when Sam's boyfriend (who had carried the camera gear and who we weren't told about until the last line) suddenly thrust his large cock into Sarah? While Sam was blocking her view. LOL. What a finish that would have been. Did Sarah ever get to sample an extra cock or was it only her husband who got the extra partner? Great story though. Cheers

Rocky62Rocky62over 1 year ago

Janet Mason, or Wifeysworld … internet to screenplay. Maybe something for Netflix to do next

iammweaseliammweaselover 1 year ago

Nice try. But you came up waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay short.

Didnt do anything to remove the stench of LW today.

26thNC26thNCover 1 year ago

Ir day in LW. LW gets 3 stories, at least this one was a story instead of a Jamal joke like the other 2, while the dedicated IR site got 0.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I was momentarily impressed with you using a women instead of a dick in your misplaced Interracial story, but you had to stick that in at the end to stay true to the racist handbook that so many "authors" seem to follow on this site.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Fantastic!

mitchawamitchawaabout 1 year ago

Another different plot and story. Interesting led in to make home videos and upload them. The plot twist with an outsider black woman photographer The following sex scenes were well done. The ending was open with Sam bringing her boyfriend. nicely done

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Nice twist! Very good; warrants a sequel.

I'll assume the wife's face was pixel aged or otherwise disguised before uploading the second video. Possible future video could start with blindfolded husband tied spread eagle in the bed. Wife starts 69, then another male joins to fuck wife over husband's face. Blindfold removed for big finish of facial for husband to balance wife's pussy eating surprise.

Mfj

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