All Comments on 'Homebound Ch. 02'

please don't be a silent killer of our anticipation and contentment of a complete and very satisfying stories such as this. not completing this story you will not only hurt me but a alot of us who really admired your brilliance . Bless you always JodiHutchins next chapter please! (cinder).

PLEASE, pretty please , more

Just love this series and how both sets of lives are coming together.

Also would like to know a bit more how Keiko and Abagail got on in the following years after the World war two. Their story is also riveting .

I am please Kayla and Rachel Father reached out and came to his senses.

The past life experiences are so interesting and original , Great writing.

Another stonking good chapter , full of Emotion , Plot , Sexy bits and with Love at its heart . What's not to love.

And yes you have me begging for more , I am such a greedy girl.

Thank you for this Brilliant story.

JC

I second the motion of the others about continuing thus series! Please please please with a cherry on top! Am LOVING it.

Please continue the story.

oh wow what an amazing and thorough story to read. you write such engaging stories. oh stuff it - i'll just beg- please could you continue this story and kismet encounter. damn i wish i could write like you. so very many thanks from me - sarah.

That Stroudle may be a self-admitted greedy thing, but she knows a good story. So how about a little more please? I love the historical aspect, the love that spans the ages ... oh, and the cute Latina in cotton boxers.

...and if you haven't got the message, Jodi, let's have some more! You can certainly delve deeper into both sets of lives. For instance, if Jo and Rachel are reincarnations of Keiko and Abagail, the latter two could not have been exceptionally old when they died (probably in their mid- to late-sixties or early seventies). There's definitely a story-line worth exploring there. The ball's in your court. (By the way---five stars!)

I love the way you tell the story, your writing has made you one of my favorite authors. I believe this story has great potential to be continued from many different angles. It seemed a tad bit rushed at the end....if this is the end. Look forward to seeing more wonderful stories from you whichever way you decide to go.

Thank you! First off, sorry for the typos. It just shows how much of a novice I am and it’s embarrassing so, my bad! Second, I’m going to do my best to get another chapter going—after I finish the next Kismet chapter. Thank you again for all the feedback!

I know I said your first part was too long, but this one was just right, I hope you do keep this story going

Please continue, I'm quite the hopeless romantic and really like the story line.

The conflict resolved too quickly, with the villain of the piece rendered voiceless and impotent before any real drama could escalate

Yes please continue with this. I'm in love with this series. It's so good.

It was well written, well researched, and very plausible.

The sex was. Well. Extremely hot and liquidy.

Not sure about continuing with the two.

It really depends on the story you want to tell.

It seems to me you reached a closure here. Both on the couple's life, and on the political side.

You should really continue the story and I’m looking forward to read it! Love the chemistry <3

I love these characters and would love so much to see it continue.

Are you kidding? You have to go on. We want to know what Happens to Kayla and their father and hope that their weird mother comes around.

I hate to sound flippant, but I would read more of anything you wrote! I love this story. I’d love to hear how Abagail and Keiko’s lives progress. How did they cope in a time where their relationship would not be tolerated? I’d love to hear from Kayla and Kendall too. As always, much love and many thanks.

Such a well written story. Please continue. We're all on the edge of our collective seats to find out what happens with jo, Rachel, Kayla and her girlfriend. And to see how Rachel and jo explain "recurring dream" to Kayla. And to see what becomes of Rachels father after the divorce. More, please!!!

I saw your comment that you will work on another chapter in this story. That's good to hear. I agree with Maonaigh, I also want to find out what happened to Keiko and Abigail. Plus what about the rest of Rachels family? How do they react to the news of her and Kayla both coming out at the same time? I look forward to seeing where you take these characters. Thank you for sharing them with us.

More....

Love love love the story, do continue!!!

Jodi, this series is really , really good. I got goose bumps in the last paragraph.

Excellent writing, and personally I would end it there... No just kidding please I would love you to write more of this. ;)

Yes you got to write at lease one more chapter just so we know what happens to them all so please continue with it

This is one of the best story series I have read here. I didn't comment after reading the first chapter but gave it 5 stars. I think you should continue along the same vein, and perhaps have Jo and Rachael meet Keiko and Abigail or their descendants.

Love this story. Please don't stop now!

I don't normally read stories that beg a scientific background, but the hell with it , I just loved this one . Love the girls, and maybe you can do more with their story...

Paul

PS... off to see what else you've written...

I have become a huge fan of your work, and am really looking forward to reading more. Thank you so very much for sharing these stories with us!

5🌟 is not even enough for your writing. You must continue your story, I’m so invested in their chemistry and relationship and what’s going to happen to Kayla and is Jo going to ask her to marry her and .....

Jodi, I read many stories on lit, watt pad, along with being a frequenter of bellabooks

Please continue the story line, you are very good at this.

I enjoyed your stories! However, trying to sympathized and criticize a political situation without fully understand the extent of the situations is terrible. The Japanese were legalized immigrants. The japanese teach their youngs. They don't breed and not train them. The mexican and latinos that came over illegally is a whole different situation. I'm not saying the separating families is right it shouldn't happen. But illegals needs to be stopped. Poverty and gangster stems and thrives from these environment. Lots of the illegals are underage and they do not use contraceptives. They keep breeding and don't train their youngs so you really need to understand the situation before having this countries runs by gangsters and rude kids that runs around without trainings. They blasts their musics wherever they go without regards to their neighbors or considerations of children's ear perception. I have latinos responsible friends but they did not come over illegally. They are good citizens. They train their youngs. I'm not saying all the illegals are irresponsible but the majority of them I see that are traveling here have no time to train their youngs they have a hard time taking care of themselves they need to be neutered!

JodiHutchens,

I loved and was enthralled by the Homebound stories. The emerging excitement leading in a “natural” progression to love and commitment makes the passion so much more compelling. I really hope the story continues.

However, I was as shocked away from my happy engrossment, as if someone spoke a rude and unwelcome crude interruption, with the crap equivalizing of the innocent interred Japanese and criminal trespassers sneaking into our country to steal citizenship and taxpayers’ benefit$. The two ain’t equivalent!

It’s a great slow build so please carry on

Ignore the racist jerks. The story is good and the parallels between how immigrants are being treated now and the Japanese internment camps is far too applicable. I'd love to see you continue this.

Love the series and would definitely support its continuation. Although I wasn't sure about the reincarnation detail at the beginning it slowly grew one me.

But good writing... there’s a difference between racism and naive sympathies. Please do your research before writing on subject you’re not familiar with. The Japanese citizens and the illegal immigrants is not on the same ground.

Thank you! About continuing, i feel you closed the book on this tale. If you reopen it, it must meet your own standards, which I'm sure are high. Probably more easy to start something new. Either way, I will welcome any new product from your fine writer's pen.

There are still places to go with this, so do, please, continue.

And as for "naive sympathies", they can go fuck themselves!

xx

Such good writing I loved the slow development of the characters and how you melded Keiko and her family into today.

As for continuing, I feel that there could be another chapter but you must continue Jo and Rachels story with the same connection to say 1947 with Keiko and Abigail.

I have been hanging out for chapter 2 ever since I read chapter 1! Please continue Rachel and Jo's story!!

can't be as good, or better than the first? Never gave much thought to the possibility of reincarnation but I'd like to believe that we are eventually reunited with our loved ones in some shape or form. Loved the mention of the photograph in the textbook at the end. I would like to see, not so much another chapter, but more of a "spinoff" that would focus on Kayla and Kendall's relationship. She would have just turned 18, of course.

I'm enjoying this one as much as the rest of your lovely stories. Please continue this one at least one more chapter. Jo and Rachael are a lovely couple. Their connection could stand to be explored a bit more. Thank you for all your great stories!

Great story. The historical aspects are really well done and the romance and eroticism are hot ;)

What a wonderful story. The plot is very intriguing, and then you add lovable characters and that's all she wrote. Would love to read more of this adventure.

You could always write one on Kaylla further down the road like in college or after. I have come across a few authors who have done stories like that and I really liked them. As well as they seemed to be received as a whole on here and get on average 3-4 stars.

Sorry, but so far its like watching 2/3 or even 1/2 a brilliant film!!!!

Personally I think this needs a part 3 or even parts 3 and 4.

Amazingly original story plot, and so graphic I (and hopefully others) can actually envisage the flat/condo in my minds eye.

Interesting idea about the little sisters story made earlier.

Please, at least one more part :)

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Really resonated with the theme of consciousness and the soul. Would be happy to read more chapters of Jo and Rachel, or a new series.

Wonderfully done! I’d like to see where you take this story before moving on, there’s much that can happen before it ends! Thank you for sharing this with us!

Loved your story telling, please do more chapters

I for one would love to read more of this story, very well done! thank you for your work!!

more please.

Second reading, second comment - a superlative story!

Loved it the first time, still hoping for more of your work - on this story or any other.

i'd love to see what happens next

Your a great writer. Your story is amazing (both chapters) and I’m affamed for more !

I say make a time skip and have them get married.

It's a beautiful story, well written and thought out, I came to care for the characters and feel just as you describe it when a reader finishes a good book, so please do continue it, by the way that's the best description I've heard of when good book is finished.

Please please carry on with the story so we know how these four ladies become married or just in a relationship for life. It is a very good story you have written here please finish it so we know how it all ends thank you fantastic story.

Definitely. I'm captivated by the characters in your story, what happens to them and how they connect with Abagail and Keiko.

Definitely do some more as I enjoyed the story immensely..

Jo and Rachel, Keiko and Abagail, Kayla and Kendall. Lots of possibilities including how the family responds without mom.

I do think Jo and Rachel stay together long term. Not predicting anything else.

I do hope that you eventually get back to the story arc!! There is so much left unsaid from the story!

I loved it and would love to see it continue.

Beautiful.

Heart wrenching at times, but none the less, simply, purely beautiful.

Thank you.

I was hoping you would continue if only to tie in the reincarnation angle. Love your writing, have read it twice years apart.

A very tender sweet romance ..... And we might don't understand this things happen between sky and earth or in the deep subconscious or int he past which comes together in the Here&Now, but after all beings and happenings are just pure energetics, so the flow is just happen and for us human beings hardly to accept because we can't touch this ....... Marvelous written ...... And yeah why not follow this tale a little longer

I absolutely LOVED this story, and would be over the moon if it continued! Please please please? Mebbe Kayla could be Hana, reincarnate? Just a thought.

Been over 4 years guess no more, enjoyed this

I have no idea of what direction your story will take with these characters but I would surely love to read some more about them

What an amazing story. More please

Amazing story. Pity there wasnt more.

Can you please please continue with them..? I have loved their story till now..

I liked the two stories a lot. And hope like a lot of others that you write another chapter. I also believe in reincarnation as there is a lot that can not be explained by anything else..

Great two stories.

Thank you for them

I really enjoyed their story.