All Comments on 'HomeComing'

Such a great story! So well written - I could picture every moment! More, more, more!

SERGEANT!

Awesome story. Loved how it came together, a little surprised in wasn't in the "Interracial" category...but loved it all the same. It would be great to hear how this new "family" makes out in the end!! Thanks in any case for sharing this one!

Great story (5*) that I feel might better fit in the interracial category. As a story with a military focus, I feel the narrator not spelling his rank, "sergeant", correctly, is more difficult to believe than anything else in the tale. The characters are likeable, so I'd like to see them in a future story.

Enjoyed it however University of Kansas is in Lawrence. KSU is in Manhattan.

Long but very well written. Maybe a follow up when Charlene comes to visit.

Not sure why this is in this category but was a fantastic story. Thank you for writing and glad I saw it.

Good Good story. Loved it. Please keep it going. But no bad stuff, only good stuff.

A great story - well written. I enjoyed it. Thanks.

Very good. Thanks for the effort and for sharing with us.

Absolutely beautiful prose. Probably the most pleasant read I've come across in this genre. My only regret is that he and Ida didn't get to connect . . . .

Is a great story line it has a bit of everything that you can put in one Love , Kindness, Sex and Action also Family. Thank you .

Thank you for the time and effort you've put into this excellent piece of writing. I read it a few years back already, but when I came across it again today I enjoyed it even more. I think it's one of my favorites here. Besides character development and good grammar, it has a good balance between a gripping story line and believable sex situations. Hope you keep using your amazing power of writing for us to share here. thanks again!