All Comments on 'Homecoming'

Very poorly written!

No back ground the Title leads you to believe she was coming back after leaving for a week,year or whatever but to just come home from work and go to BDSM w/o any explanation as to how they got there leaves a lot out..

I don't usually go for BDSM stories but I really enjoyed reading this. It didn't need a back story unless you are going to develop it into a multi part series. It worked for me and I thought it was well worth reading....Thanks

It was a bit on the short side and more scene than story, but what there was of it was very good. Well done and please keep on writing. Four stars and thank you for posting.

For the read.