All Comments on 'Homecoming Ch. 06'

what a bitch! (Justine that is ;)

I'm starting to belive that our hero is an idiot... If he cares for Lula, he would not permit ANYBODY to slander her name. Believe me, if Lula heard one ounce of what that hussy said, a cup of scalding coffee would be the least of her worries... Justine is too obvious. I'm very dissapointed by this hero, one who is so easily led by an expert flirt and manipulator. That's not a very heroice quality, isn't it?

Hey there you two loyal readers. Thanks for the feedback. I know that I said I wasn't going to post feedback in response anymore but after reading some of these comments, I just had to chime in. Yep, Daniel is a complete and utter fool; a kid who thinks he's doing the right thing because he believes that he and Lula shouldn't be together for a number of misplaced reasons. The issues are more with him than anything Lula has done -- he knows this. I really struggled to introduce Justine because I wanted to make her a redeemable bitch. Regardless of how important she turns out in the story. Please hang in there...things aren't what they seem with her or anyone.

he seems to be so wishy washy when it comes to Lula, then to take Justine's side and believe her after having practically been raised with Lula. I am starting to not like his cowardly character!