by donaldelliott11
It just sounds like a horrific night with terrible repercussions including psychological.
Well written and thought out but I really disliked reading it
The saving grace was it was short. I suppose I don’t read on Lit to depress myself, and that is what this story did. Escapism is more the attraction, and this left me feeling sad there are guys out there who think this is OK, and girls who are comfortable with carrying and unknown man’s child while using the experience to diminish their partner. Just sad.
Don, I usually like your stories and usually give them high ratings. I'm not a prude and nonconsent/reluctance can be interesting and arousing, but date rape is not subject that I find interesting or arousing. It is just wrong. Period.
Of course you are free to write any story you want, but, hey... you asked for feedback... (BTW, I didn't rate the story, so I won't drag your averages down.)
Super hot concept, but not enough details about the actual rape, ignore the idiots that can't tell fantasy apart from real life.
Do not care for the last paragraph. It ruined the story which otherwise would have been a 5