All Comments on 'Homelands Pt. 01 Ch. 15'

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digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 12 years ago
The boy needs to stop thinking with his little head

It looks like Frank is in deep shit now.

Perhaps he will learn a lot about his race, while he is in the other world.

At least he'll be away from that bitch Brie.

Thanks for the chapter.

jdnunyerjdnunyerover 12 years agoAuthor

Good observations, DigDaddy.

MrLurkerMrLurkerover 12 years ago

5*

You pointed me at the link, and I was up all

damn night reading chapters 1 & 2.

/blurryredeyedfacepalm

Now where the hell is chapter 3? /crackswhip

jdnunyerjdnunyerover 12 years agoAuthor

Hey, Mr. Lurker.

That's very flattering. I'm glad you enjoyed them.

I'm currently working on Part Three. I'm about halfway done with the first draft, though I'll also want to revise it a bit before posting.

But if you want to read what I've got, understanding that it's a bit raw still, I'd be glad to send it to you. Just shoot me an email.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
whoa....

she did that to her parents.....what ...a...bitch!

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