All Comments on 'Homelands Pt. 01 Ch. 16'

This is the final chapter of Part One.

I will begin submitting Part Two soon.

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The bitch Brie is just wanting Frank to be out of her hair by sending him away to spy on the King, and the King wants Frank to spy for him.

The poor boy don't have a chance especially if he has to seduce the daughter of he man that he is going to say with in the mortal world.

Good story, thanks.

That sums things up pretty well, DigDaddy.

Thanks again for your interest. I hope you tune back in for Part Two when those chapters start appearing.