All Comments on 'Homelands Pt. 03 Ch. 06'

I was a little confused at first when they were at Brie"s mother's house , until I found out that it was a veil of Frank's.

A lot of hot sex in this chapter, and a lot of explaining of what Bobby is all about in this chapter also.

I hope everything works out for Frank our hero, he's still a bit of a candy ass when it comes to fighting, and I'm sure it will come down to that, when he goes on his rescue mission.

Thanks for the great chapter.

Glad you enjoyed the chapter, DigDaddy.

how insanely frustrating the time jumps you keep making are. Yes, you make them work into the overall story; but damn. Clearly you have no intention of cutting back but maybe put a little act-change marker in your chapters so I am not completely lost for a few paragraphs; please! Still a fan, thanks for the entertainment.

Anon. Thanks for the feedback. An act change marker is a good idea.

I've already submitted the remaining chapters of Part Three. But I will try to make it clearer in the future.

for a moment there i thought we were in another trial of succession.

im glad they're giving good ol democracy a try.

seems like giving how old they all are that they would had tried systems of government other them feudalism and might making right.

but everybody who thought that way probably was eaten

That last part. :)

There are plenty of societies in our world today that are old yet autocratic...