All Comments on 'Homelands Pt. 07 Ch. 01'

JD: This is excellent story telling and, coupled with a plot line that promises extraordinary vistas in development, I can foresee this being your best series. The mystery woman in Savannah....good or evil? Where will she fit in? What a wonderfully crafted narration! A man who realizes his other-self only when he dreams, has wonderful sex with his mother (very well written, by the way) whenever he dreams....and finally a second mystery woman and the promise of future conflict, all in his dreams. I'm loving it. Keep it up. An Hoa Rifleman

Thanks, as ever, for the generous praise Rifleman. I hope the remaining chapters deliver on the promise of the first one!

JD

I was a little worried that after so many chapters to the story, the next family would feel repetitive. But I was wrong. I can tell there will be plenty to look forward to here.

-Myers.

Glad you think so, Myers. I hope the story continues to hold your interest moving forward.

Keeps getting better and better. If only I could wake up and move in with Caronwyn! :)

In the meantime reading about those two will have to do. What did the mystery woman do to deserve such punishment?

_Einar_

Good to hear from you, Einar. Glad you're interested in the new family. :) We'll hear more about the mystery woman later. I won't confirm her identity explicitly until Part 8, but some hints will be dropped soon enough...

as the months bled together i must admit i stopped looking for an update, on a whim i thought maybe, just maybe...today. glad to see you back

First i like the new character, new delivery, and new dynamic i was getting a little tired of coming of age stories with kids going to the homelands and toppling a monarch. Cahil is an adult and struggles with his place in the world with very plausible issues regarding his "dreams" and his perception of reality. I like that you made it a question for him. i appreciate that you made his character define his situation, rather then the other way around as was kinda the case with a few earlier protagonists. the intrigue your setting up might make spring your strongest chapters yet. i have made no secret that i enjoy the macro level political machinations the royal courts but right now im just wondering what Liaden's intentions are. ...superbly nice work

ps for awhile it thought britney was brianna and we were in in some kinda flash back until i looked and saw the names were actually different. I don't no why i shared that.

Anon

Thanks, anon. Glad you're enjoying the new cycle. I hope it does end up being the strongest yet.