All Comments on 'Hometown MILF'

*** Thanks for the read.

Not bad. Maybe cut down on the sex scenes so your lack of descriptives seem to be limited and so get a bit repetitive. I do appreciate that you've submitted something contrary to the cuck crap that's taken over the site. Today alone there must be at least a dozen "I asked other men to fuck my wife and I sucked their cum out of her stinking cunt and I loved it" stories listed. I don't read thT crap and the bastard authors who try to camouflage their shit aren't talented enough to cover their garbage for more than a paragraph or 2. Again, thanks for something refreshing.

Very good read. Please continue.

With 411 stories published, you should be better at character development, and building tension between the characters. There is little more than 'he did this, then she did that.' I liked the ot, just wish you did more...

Find some new words, mix up the descriptions, and give the characters a little more personality.

Enjoyable story

many thanks