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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
the bait was well placed

We are truelly snared.

nanobotnanobotabout 11 years ago
The play's the thing

Another fine opening. I like how you set the tone, describe the scene and arrange the scene. It reminds me more of Tennessee Williams than Thomas Wolfe but that's just my opinion. I love how you use character development as foreshadowing rather than events. Can't wait for the next chapter.

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Former SR71 pilot, currently professional writer and book editor; writes under name "habu" on other erotica sites. My erotica books can be found under the author name habu or Dirk Hessian (and coauthored books with Sabb under the names Shabbu or Stephen Kessel) at S...

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