All Comments on 'Homewrecker'

by Homewrecker777

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baikalisanbaikalisanover 9 years ago
Didn't think I'd like it.

With that title and its implications but I took a chance anyway and enjoyed it very much. Please continue because I'd like to see u flesh out these characters and their lives more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

"then he through his body on top of mine." Should be- "then he THREW his body on top of mine."There was another instance of you using the wrong one too.

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